Part 1
Giám khảo
Did you have a bike when you were a child?
Thí sinh
Yes, I did. I have a pink eye. I had a pink bike, but I'm I'm not really good at biking.
Giám khảo
Do you think bikes are popular in your country?
Thí sinh
Yes, it is very popular in China and we usually bike when it we are going on a short term way.
Did you have a bike when you were a child?
Điểm: 55.0Gợi ý: 在回答中注意时态一致、句子连贯和避免重复。先用一句话直接回答问题,然后用一到两句补充细节(例如什么时候拥有、谁给的、学骑车的经历),并使用连接词或短语使表达更流畅。避免自相矛盾(如同时用现在时和过去时)以及重复词(如“I'm I'm”)。
Ví dụ: Yes, I did. I had a pink bicycle when I was about six years old; my parents bought it for me as a birthday present. However, I never became very confident at riding, so I usually rode it only in the park or under supervision.
Do you think bikes are popular in your country?
Điểm: 60.0Gợi ý: 回答时注意主谓一致和更自然的词汇搭配。用一到两句给出理由或例子,并使用连接词如“because”或“for example”来支撑观点。替换笨拙的短语(如“short term way”)为更地道的表达(例如“short trips”或“short distances”)。
Ví dụ: Yes, I think bicycles are very popular in China because many people use them for short trips and commuting. For example, students often ride to school and commuters use shared bikes for the last part of their journey.
× Yes, I did. I have a pink eye. I had a pink bike, but I'm I'm not really good at biking.
✓ Yes, I did. I had a pink bike, but I'm not really good at biking.
原句中“I have a pink eye.”与上下文不符且可能是笔误或口误。考官问过去是否有自行车,回答应使用过去时“I had a pink bike.” 建议在此处删除不相关的句子“I have a pink eye.” 或改为正确的过去时表述。注意不要重复“I’m I'm”。 建议:回答与问题时态保持一致,检查口语中的口误并避免重复。
× Yes, it is very popular in China and we usually bike when it we are going on a short term way.
✓ Yes, they are very popular in China and we usually bike when we are going on short trips.
原句有多处问题: 1) 主语与代词不一致:前文问“Do you think bikes are popular...?” 正确指代复数“bikes”应使用复数代词“they”,而不是“it”。 2) 冗余和语序问题:“when it we are going”多余且词序错误,应为“when we are going”。 3) 词汇搭配不当:“on a short term way”不是地道表达,常用短语为“on short trips”或“for short trips”。 改正建议:使用复数代词“they”,简化从句为“when we are going on short trips”,并保持时态一致(一般现在时用于习惯性动作)。