Bike— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Give a clear, direct topic sentence in past tense, avoid repetition and fillers, and provide one or two concise supporting details (reason and brief context). Use correct grammar (past simple) and smoother linking words such as 'because' or 'so'. Keep to 2–4 sentences.

Ví dụ: No, I didn’t have a bike when I was a child because my family owned only one bicycle and my father used it for work. As a result, I usually walked to school or shared rides with neighbors.

Gợi ý: Start with a clear topic sentence and use correct subject-verb agreement. Avoid repetition and vague phrases; give one or two specific reasons and link them logically using words like 'because', 'so', or 'therefore'. Keep sentences concise and limit to 3–4 sentences.

Ví dụ: Yes, bikes are very popular in my country because they are affordable and convenient for short trips. For example, many people use bicycles to commute to work or the market, since they save time and avoid traffic congestion.

× I don't have a bike when I was a child uh because my father because there is only one bike at at our home.

✓ I didn't have a bike when I was a child because there was only one bike at our home.

The sentence mixes present tense ('don't have', 'there is') with past time reference ('when I was a child'). Use past tense consistently for past events: 'didn't have' and 'was'. Also remove redundant words and fillers for clarity.

× So I do not own a bike because my father is not that much for it.

✓ So I did not own a bike because my father did not like it much.

The original uses present tense and awkward pronoun phrasing ('that much for it'). Match past tense ('did not own', 'did not like') and use the correct verb phrase 'like it much' to express preference.

× His was just a normal person and there was only one bike in my home.

✓ He was just a normal person, and there was only one bike in my home.

Use the correct subject pronoun 'He' instead of 'His' to start the clause. The rest is past tense and acceptable; add a comma before 'and' for readability.

× Yes, I think bikes are very popular in my country because every person have one bike when, where, whenever they want to go outside, they just they just they just take their bike and go away.

✓ Yes, I think bikes are very popular in my country because every person has a bike; whenever they want to go out, they just take their bike and go.

Use singular agreement 'every person has' (not 'have'). Simplify redundant phrases ('when, where, whenever') and remove repeated fragments ('they just' repeated). Use 'go out' instead of 'go outside' for natural phrasing.

× And bikes are more popular because every person on their own bikes and it is very easy for traveling that you travel on your own things exact anything other.

✓ Bikes are popular because people use their own bikes, and it is very easy to travel by bike compared with other options.

The original has subject-verb and word-order issues ('every person on their own bikes' is incorrect). Use 'people use their own bikes'. Replace awkward phrase 'it is very easy for traveling that you travel on your own things exact anything other' with clear comparative phrasing: 'it is very easy to travel by bike compared with other options.'