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Part 1

Giám khảo

Did you have a bike when you were a child?

Thí sinh

Is I actually had a pink bike and it was very gorgeous.

Giám khảo

Do you think bikes are popular in your country?

Thí sinh

No, they are not popular in my country because my people love to use the bus or subways at circle.

Đánh giá

Tổng

Tổng: 5.0Trôi chảy và mạch lạc: 5.0Phát âm: 5.0Ngữ pháp: 5.0Từ vựng: 5.0

Part 1

Did you have a bike when you were a child?

Điểm: 52.0

Gợi ý: Be grammatically correct, answer directly, and give 1–2 supporting details using linking words. Correct verb form, remove irrelevant words, and avoid redundancy. For example, start with a clear topic sentence ("Yes, I did."), then add brief specifics (color, how you felt, or how often you rode) using a linking word like "and" or "because."

Ví dụ: Yes, I did. I had a pink bike that I loved, and I rode it almost every day to visit my friends. It made me feel free and confident because I could go anywhere by myself.

Do you think bikes are popular in your country?

Điểm: 48.0

Gợi ý: Give a direct answer, correct singular/plural and word choice, and provide clear specific reasons with linking words. Use "public transport" instead of awkward phrases and avoid unclear words like "at circle." Keep to 2–3 sentences: a topic sentence and a supporting reason or example.

Ví dụ: No, I don’t think bicycles are very popular in my country. Most people prefer public transport such as buses and subways because they are faster and more convenient in busy cities.

Ngữ pháp

Incorrect use of pronouns

× Is I actually had a pink bike and it was very gorgeous.

I actually had a pink bike and it was very gorgeous.

The sentence begins with 'Is I' which is incorrect. The correct subject pronoun is 'I' without the auxiliary 'Is' for a simple past statement. This is an incorrect use of pronoun and incorrect auxiliary. Remove the extraneous 'Is' so the sentence correctly uses the subject 'I' with the past tense verb 'had'. Suggestion: Start simple past statements with the subject followed by the past verb: 'I had...'. Please note the verb tense (past) is appropriate for a childhood experience.

Incorrect use of prepositions

× No, they are not popular in my country because my people love to use the bus or subways at circle.

No, they are not popular in my country because people prefer to use buses or the subway for commuting.

Several issues here relate to prepositions, articles and noun forms. 'My people' is unnatural; 'people' alone is better. 'Use the bus or subways' mixes singular and plural; use 'buses or the subway' or 'buses or subways' consistently. 'At circle' is incorrect preposition and unclear; likely intended meaning is 'for commuting' or 'to get around.' Replace with 'for commuting' to convey purpose. Also adjust word choice: 'prefer' is more natural than 'love to use.' Overall corrects preposition use and article/noun agreement.

Từ vựng trọng tâm

PopularWell-liked; Nonspecialist; Widespread; Mass
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