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Part 1

Giám khảo

Did you have a bike when you were a child?

Thí sinh

Unfortunately, no 'cause when I was a child I was afraid to ride a bike, 'cause I was scared of high speed and the sky to fall down and hurt myself. So I don't have a bike.

Giám khảo

Do you think bikes are popular in your country?

Thí sinh

They are because in China bikes are pretty cheap compared to the price of cars and electric bikes. And there's no limits right? Everyone can ride a bike unlike cars you have to about 18 to drive.

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Part 1

Did you have a bike when you were a child?

Điểm: 62.0

Gợi ý: 总体回答可以理解,但存在语法与表达不自然的问题、重复使用“'cause”,以及不必要或不准确的细节(如“the sky to fall down”)。建议: 1) 用更自然的句子结构直接回答问题(主题句)。 2) 减少重复,避免俚语缩写多次使用(如"'cause"),使用完整连词如"because"或其他连接词。 3) 修正不准确的描述,用更合理的恐惧原因并给出一两句具体细节来支持观点,长度控制在最多5句内。

Ví dụ: No, I didn't. I was too afraid to ride a bicycle when I was a child because I worried about going too fast and falling off. For example, I once saw a friend crash and that made me feel nervous about riding. So I never learned to ride and we didn't own a bike at home.

Do you think bikes are popular in your country?

Điểm: 72.0

Gợi ý: 回答方向很好,包含原因比较与对比,但存在口语化句子碎片、语法错误和不够连贯的问题。建议: 1) 开头先给出简短直接的主题句(Yes, they are popular) 2) 使用连接词(for example, because, moreover)使句子衔接更自然 3) 修正语法错误(如"you have to about 18 to drive"应为"you have to be about 18 to drive"或更自然的表达),并给出具体例子或数字以增强说服力。控制在不超过5句。

Ví dụ: Yes, bicycles are still quite popular in China. They are much cheaper than cars and even many electric bikes, so they are an affordable option for short trips. For example, many students and workers use shared bikes or personal bicycles to commute. Also, there are no strict age or license requirements for riding a bicycle, which makes them accessible to everyone.

Ngữ pháp

Past tense issue

× Unfortunately, no 'cause when I was a child I was afraid to ride a bike, 'cause I was scared of high speed and the sky to fall down and hurt myself. So I don't have a bike.

Unfortunately, no, because when I was a child I was afraid to ride a bike — I was scared of going fast and of falling and hurting myself. So I didn't have a bike.

问题类型:过去时错误(5)。 原句中叙述童年时的经历,需使用过去时态保持时态一致。句中“don't have a bike”使用现在时,与前文的过去时不一致,应改为过去时“didn't have a bike”。另外,口语缩写“'cause”建议写成“because”,并将“the sky to fall down”改为更符合英语表达的“falling”。 建议:回溯描述过去经历时,主句与从句都用过去时;避免口语缩写写作时混乱表达。

Third person singular issue

× They are because in China bikes are pretty cheap compared to the price of cars and electric bikes.

They are, because in China bikes are pretty cheap compared to cars and electric bikes.

问题类型:第三人称单数问题(2)。 原句“If”并非明显第三人称动词错误,但句子中结构可更自然地省略重复的定冠词并使用复数名词“cars”。同时需在“They are”后加逗号连接原因从句。 建议:注意主语与谓语一致,避免不必要的冠词重复,使表达更简洁自然。

Modal verb usage

× And there's no limits right? Everyone can ride a bike unlike cars you have to about 18 to drive.

And there are no limits, right? Everyone can ride a bike; unlike cars, you have to be about 18 to drive.

问题类型:情态动词/结构使用错误(4)。 原句中“there's no limits”主谓不一致,应为“there are no limits”(复数)。此外,“you have to about 18 to drive”缺少动词“be”来表示年龄要求,应为“you have to be about 18 to drive”。 建议:检查there is/there are 的主谓一致;表示年龄要求时用“have to be [age]”或“be at least [age]”。

Từ vựng trọng tâm

AfraidFrightened; Reluctant
CheapInexpensive; Poor-quality; Miserly; Despicable; Ashamed
HighTall; High-ranking; Inflated; Strong; Favorable
PrettyAttractive; Quite; Beautify
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