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Part 1

Giám khảo

Did you have a bike when you were a child?

Thí sinh

I did have a bike when I was a kid and that was a gift from my parents.

Giám khảo

Do you think bikes are popular in your country?

Thí sinh

I don't think bikes are popular in my country because instead of bikes most people in Taiwan usually have scooters and they are more convenient.

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Part 1

Did you have a bike when you were a child?

Điểm: 78.0

Gợi ý: 回答直接且自然,但可以更符合雅思口语评分标准:1) 增加主题句后的具体细节(例如自行车的类型、使用频率或对你的意义);2) 使用连接词使句子更流畅;3) 控制句子数量,不超过五句且避免简单重复。示例结构:主题句 + 具体细节 + 感受或影响。

Ví dụ: Yes, I had a small blue bicycle when I was a child, which my parents gave me for my seventh birthday. I rode it almost every day around my neighborhood, so it helped me become more independent and confident. Although it was simple, I remember feeling very proud whenever I managed to ride without training wheels.

Do you think bikes are popular in your country?

Điểm: 72.0

Gợi ý: 观点明确但可以更具体并使用连接词来支持理由:1) 给出具体例子或数据(例如家庭拥有率、常见用途或路况);2) 使用连接词(for example, however, therefore)使论证更连贯;3) 可补充对未来趋势或个人看法。

Ví dụ: Not really; bicycles are less common than scooters in Taiwan because scooters are faster and more practical for daily commuting. For example, many families own a scooter for short trips to work or the market, and city infrastructure often favors two-wheeled motor vehicles. However, I think cycling could become more popular if cities add more bike lanes and promote it for health and environmental benefits.

Ngữ pháp

Third person singular issue

× I don't think bikes are popular in my country because instead of bikes most people in Taiwan usually have scooters and they are more convenient.

I don't think bikes are popular in my country because, instead of bikes, most people in Taiwan usually have scooters and they are more convenient.

句子主要问题是标点和连贯性,而不涉及动词人称错误。为了更清晰,应在 because 后加入逗号,并用逗号把插入成分“instead of bikes”与主句隔开;另外“they are more convenient”指代明确(scooters),语法正确。建议在书写较长句子时用标点分隔插入语,使句子更易理解。

Sentence structure errors

× I did have a bike when I was a kid and that was a gift from my parents.

I did have a bike when I was a kid, and it was a gift from my parents.

句子结构问题在于重复代词指称不够自然,原句用“that”也可但在口语中用“it”更常见;同时在并列句中在前后分句之间加入逗号更标准。建议使用逗号连接并列分句,并用自然的代词指代先行词以提高流畅度。

Từ vựng trọng tâm

PopularWell-liked; Nonspecialist; Widespread; Mass
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