Bike— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Be clearer and more concise. Start with a direct topic sentence that answers the question (Yes/No), then add one or two specific supporting details (age, what type of bike, a short memory). Use correct tense and avoid filler words like “um” and “uh.” Keep the whole answer to no more than 3–4 sentences. For example, say your exact age when you had the bike and one specific memory about riding it.

Ví dụ: Yes. I had a bicycle when I was about seven years old. It was a small red bike with training wheels, and I remember riding it in the park near my house every weekend. Riding that bike made me feel independent and happy.

Gợi ý: Answer directly and give clear reasons with linking words. Start with a clear opinion (Yes/No/Somewhat), then provide 2 specific reasons or examples, using linking phrases like “because,” “for example,” or “also.” Use correct subject–verb agreement and avoid repetition. Keep it to 2–3 sentences.

Ví dụ: Yes, I think bicycles are very popular in my country because they are cheap and convenient for short trips. For example, many people ride bikes to work or school, and in some cities there are bike lanes and public bike-sharing schemes.

× Umm, when I was young, uh, I forgot seven years old, I used to have a car, bike and in this time I, I'm really happy.

✓ Umm, when I was young, uh, I was about seven years old. I used to have a car and a bike, and at that time I was really happy.

The original sentence misuses 'forgot' where a state ('was' or 'was about') is needed to indicate age; this is an incorrect use of pronouns/verb choice and sentence structure. Also 'car, bike' requires an article before 'bike' and 'in this time' is incorrect; use 'at that time'. The correction fixes the verb for age, adds articles for countable nouns, and replaces the wrong phrase with the correct time expression. Suggestion: use 'I was X years old' or 'I was about X' to state age; use 'a' before singular countable nouns; use 'at that time' for past reference.

× Umm I think by is so popular in all the world because a bike have so many function and it's help people. Going to going.

✓ Umm, I think bikes are very popular all over the world because a bike has so many functions and it helps people get around.

Multiple errors: 'by' is a typo for 'bikes' (subject number), so subject and verb number must agree. 'in all the world' is incorrect preposition and order; use 'all over the world'. 'a bike have' shows singular/plural disagreement; singular 'a bike' requires 'has'. 'so many function' needs plural 'functions'. 'it's help people' requires third person singular verb 'helps'. 'Going to going' is incomplete and informal; 'get around' expresses the intended meaning. Suggestion: ensure subject and verb agree (bikes are; a bike has; it helps) and use correct idioms like 'all over the world' and 'get around'.