Bike— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Improve grammar, clarity and relevance. Start with a clear direct topic sentence, correct verb tenses and singular/plural forms, and provide one or two concise supporting details. Use linking words (for example, “because” or “so”) to connect ideas. Keep answer within 1–3 sentences. For example, say who owned bikes in the family and why that was the case.

Ví dụ: Yes. I had a bike when I was a child because I lived in a small town where biking was common. In fact, I have five siblings and most of us owned bikes, which we used to ride to school and for fun on weekends.

Gợi ý: Work on clearer vocabulary, grammar and structure. Begin with a direct opinion sentence, then give two specific reasons using linking words like “because” and “also.” Avoid filler words and correct phrases (e.g., “developing country,” “cannot afford,” “public transportation is limited”). Keep it to 2–3 sentences.

Ví dụ: Yes, I think bikes are very popular in my country because many people cannot afford cars. Also, public transportation is limited in rural areas, so bicycles are a cheap and practical way to travel for work and school.

× Yeah I had I have 5 sibling and everyone have a bite.

✓ Yeah, I had/I have 5 siblings and everyone has a bike.

The sentence contains singular/plural errors: 'sibling' should be plural 'siblings' when referring to 5 people (Grammar Problem Type 1). Also 'everyone' is singular and requires singular verb 'has' (subject-verb agreement related to pluralization). Additionally there is a likely typo 'bite' which should be 'bike' to fit context. Suggestion: use 'siblings' for multiple people, and use 'everyone has' or 'all of them have' for correct agreement; choose past or present consistently depending on the meaning (I had vs I have).

× Yeah, I think so because it's a very popular in my country.

✓ Yeah, I think so because it's very popular in my country.

The phrase 'a very popular' is incorrect because 'popular' is an adjective that does not require the indefinite article when used predicatively with 'be' (Grammar Problem Type 17). Remove 'a' to make 'very popular.' Suggestion: say 'it's very popular' or 'a very popular thing' if you add a noun after the adjective.

× Uh, our country is endeavourment country, so a lot of people can can't buying a car and also the public transportations, transportation is not complete so.

✓ Uh, our country is a developing country, so a lot of people can't buy a car and public transportation is incomplete.

Multiple errors: 'endeavourment' is not correct; the intended word is 'developing' or 'underdeveloped' (Incorrect use of adjectives, Grammar Problem Type 13). Missing article before 'country' requires 'a' (Article error, Grammar Problem Type 22, but corrected here as part of adjective fix). 'can can't buying' mixes modal and verb forms; after modal 'can' use base form 'buy' and do not combine 'can' with 'can't' (Modal verb usage and verb + -ing form, Types 4 and 8). 'public transportations' is incorrect plurality and countability — 'transportation' is uncountable in this sense, so use 'public transportation' and 'is incomplete' (Singular/plural and article issues, Types 1 and 22). Suggestion: use 'a developing country,' use 'can't buy,' and treat 'public transportation' as uncountable and pair with 'is incomplete.'