Part 1
Giám khảo
Did you have a bike when you were a child?
Thí sinh
Yes, I did. When I was 7, my parents bought me an old blue bicycle and I used to ride it to visit friends and to go to the park every weekend. I loved that bike because it made me feel independent and gave me a real sense of freedom.
Giám khảo
Do you think bikes are popular in your country?
Thí sinh
Yes, many children or teenagers, uh, ride a bike to go to school.
Did you have a bike when you were a child?
Điểm: 88.0Gợi ý: 回答总体自然且信息充足,但可以更有条理地使用主题句开头并用一两处连接词使细节更连贯,同时避免过多重复(如“used to”与“every weekend”意涵略重叠)。另外可加入一两个具体细节(例如和谁一起骑或一次难忘的经历)以丰富内容并展示多样词汇。
Ví dụ: Yes. I had an old blue bicycle that my parents bought me when I was seven. I used it to visit friends and go to the park every weekend, and I often rode with my older cousin, which made the trips more fun. Because of that bike I felt more independent and confident, especially the time I learned to ride up a small hill for the first time.
Do you think bikes are popular in your country?
Điểm: 70.0Gợi ý: 回答简短且直接,但过于简略且有犹豫语(“uh”)。建议扩展内容,使用连接词给出理由和例子,例如说明流行的原因(环境、交通或习惯)并提供对比或数据,使答案更具体和有说服力。去掉填充词,保持句子流畅。
Ví dụ: Yes, I think bicycles are quite popular, especially among children and teenagers who often ride to school. One reason is that many neighborhoods are bike-friendly with safe lanes, and parents prefer cycling as a cheap and healthy option. For example, at my former school nearly half of the students cycled every day during warm months.
× Yes, many children or teenagers, uh, ride a bike to go to school.
✓ Yes, many children or teenagers ride bikes to go to school.
问题类型:复数/单数问题。句中主语为复数(many children or teenagers),与可数名词“bike”应保持复数形式。原句使用单数“a bike”会造成主谓数不一致,意思也不自然。建议将“a bike”改为复数“bikes”,或者改写为“a bike each / a bicycle”并调整句子结构,例如:"many children or teenagers each ride a bike"。