Bike— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Your answer is missing — always respond directly to the question with a clear topic sentence and 1–2 supporting details. For example, say whether you had a bike, give a short reason or a memory, and avoid long pauses and filler words (uh, um). Keep it natural and concise (max 5 sentences).

Ví dụ: Yes, I had a bike when I was a child. I used to ride it to my friend’s house every afternoon, which helped me become more independent. I also practiced riding in the park until I felt confident on busy streets.

Gợi ý: Your answer addresses the question but has many hesitations, repetition, and unclear phrasing. Improve by giving a clear topic sentence, then one or two specific supporting details using linking words (e.g., because, for example). Avoid filler sounds and correct word choice (e.g., “ride a bike,” not “write a break”).

Ví dụ: Yes, bikes are quite popular in my country because many people find them cheap and convenient for short trips. For example, when I was young I rode a bike to school every day, and today many young people still use bikes to commute or exercise.

× Differently use, I think bikes are popular in, in our country.

✓ I think bikes are popular in our country.

The original sentence includes an unclear phrase 'Differently use' and an extra comma which makes the sentence ungrammatical. This is an issue with inappropriate or unnecessary words (pronoun/phrase misuse) causing confusion. Remove the irrelevant words and redundant punctuation to form a clear subject-verb-object sentence: 'I think bikes are popular in our country.' Suggestion: avoid filler fragments and ensure only relevant phrases remain.

× Umm, uh, in uh, I was young.

✓ When I was young,

The original contains fillers ('Umm, uh, in uh') and an incomplete clause. This is a sentence structure error because the clause is left hanging without completing the idea. Correct by using a standard time clause 'When I was young,' to introduce a past habit or context. Suggestion: reduce fillers and complete clauses.

× I, I, I write a break every day and so many people, many young people, uh, ride back.

✓ I used to ride a bike every day, and many young people also ride bikes.

Multiple problems: stuttering ('I, I, I'), wrong verb tense 'write' (likely intended 'ride' or 'used to ride'), and 'ride back' is incorrect. This falls under sentence structure errors and also past tense issue. Use 'used to ride' to express habitual action in the past: 'I used to ride a bike every day.' For the second clause, use present simple 'many young people also ride bikes' to state a general fact. Remove filler words. Suggestion: choose correct verbs ('ride' not 'write' or 'ride back') and correct tense for habitual past actions ('used to').