BikePart 1 Báo cáo

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Part 1

Giám khảo

Did you have a bike when you were a child?

Thí sinh

Yes, of course.

Giám khảo

Do you think bikes are popular in your country?

Thí sinh

Yes, uh, I uh, often see half uh, people write on bike.

Đánh giá

Tổng

Tổng: 5.0Trôi chảy và mạch lạc: 5.0Phát âm: 5.0Ngữ pháp: 5.0Từ vựng: 5.0

Part 1

Did you have a bike when you were a child?

Điểm: 65.0

Gợi ý: Відповідь була занадто короткою і загальною. Додайте коротке розширення: скажіть, чи була це ваша власна чи спільна, як часто ви каталися, або яку пам’ять пов’язуєте з велосипедом. Використовуйте зв’язки (for example/when/so) і уникайте пауз та заповнювачів (uh).

Ví dụ: Yes, of course. I had a small red bicycle that I loved and rode to school every day when I was eight. For example, I used to cycle with my friends in the park after classes, which helped me stay active and made great childhood memories.

Do you think bikes are popular in your country?

Điểm: 40.0

Gợi ý: Відповідь була незрозумілою і містила багато заповнювачів. Потрібно давати чітку думку, пояснювати причини і наводити конкретні приклади або порівняння. Використовуйте зв’язки (because/for example/also) і говоріть впевнено без 'uh'.

Ví dụ: Yes, I think bikes are quite popular in my country because many people use them for short trips and exercise. For example, I often see commuters riding bikes downtown during rush hour, and there are several bike lanes in the city which makes cycling convenient.

Ngữ pháp

Verb + -ing form

× Yes, uh, I uh, often see half uh, people write on bike.

Yes, I often see many people riding bicycles.

The original sentence has several issues: 'see ... write on bike' is incorrect because the intended action is 'ride' which requires the -ing form 'riding' after verbs of perception when describing ongoing actions. 'Half' is not appropriate to mean 'many'; use 'many' or 'a lot of'. Also use the plural 'bicycles' or 'bikes' to match 'people'. Suggested correction: 'I often see many people riding bicycles.' This fits present tense habitual action. Suggestions: use 'riding' after 'see' to indicate an action in progress, replace 'half' with 'many' or 'a lot of', and use plural noun 'bicycles'.

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