Part 1
Giám khảo
Did you have a bike when you were a child?
Thí sinh
Did you have a bike when you were a child?
Giám khảo
Do you think bikes are popular in your country?
Thí sinh
At first Bikes in China is very popular because it can change our environment.
Did you have a bike when you were a child?
Điểm: 15.0Gợi ý: 你的回答不是针对问题的回答,而是复述了考官的问题。请直接作答,先用一句主题句说明是否有自行车(Yes/No),然后给出1-2个简短具体细节作为支持。例如可以提到年龄、骑车的场景或感受。保持回答自然且不重复,最多五句话。
Ví dụ: Yes, I had a bike when I was a child. I got it when I was seven and used to ride it to school and to the park every weekend. It was a simple blue bicycle with a basket, and learning to ride it made me feel very independent.
Do you think bikes are popular in your country?
Điểm: 40.0Gợi ý: 句子语法和表达不够自然,信息也不够具体。请先给出直接回答(Yes/No/Somewhat),然后用一到两句具体理由或例子支持你的观点,使用连词(for example, because, besides)让逻辑更清晰。注意时态和主谓一致,避免模糊词如“change our environment”而不说明如何变化。
Ví dụ: Yes, bikes are still quite popular in China, especially in big cities. For example, many people use shared bicycles and e-bikes for short trips because they are affordable and help reduce traffic and air pollution.
× At first Bikes in China is very popular because it can change our environment.
✓ At first, bikes in China were very popular because they helped change our environment.
问题类型:现在时使用不当(ID 6)。原句中“At first”表示过去的情况,但主句用现在时“is”不符合时间逻辑;此外“Bikes”作普通名词不需大写,且主语为复数应使用复数代词“they”,而且“can change”暗示一般能力,原句要表达过去对环境的影响应使用过去式“helped change”。改正建议:将时态改为过去时,名词小写并与代词保持一致,动词改为过去式以匹配时间状语。例句:At first, bikes in China were very popular because they helped change our environment.