Bike— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Be clear, grammatical and concise. Start with a direct topic sentence, avoid filler words (uh), and correct wrong word choices (e.g., “robbed me aloud” is incorrect). Give one or two brief supporting details using linking words. For example, explain why your parents didn’t give you a bike and mention when or if you later got one.

Ví dụ: No, I didn't have a bike when I was a child. My parents thought I was too young and worried about my safety, so they didn't buy one for me. However, I learned to ride when I was ten after they finally agreed I was ready.

Gợi ý: Use correct grammar and more precise vocabulary, and expand slightly with a linking word. Begin with a clear statement, then give specific supporting details such as reasons for popularity and a brief example or consequence. Avoid vague phrases like “much of the bike.”

Ví dụ: Yes, I think bicycles are very popular in China. For example, many people use bikes for short commutes because they are cheap and convenient. As a result, some cities face problems with overcrowded bike parking and traffic on narrow streets.

× I didn't have a bike when I was a child, uh, when I was too young, my father and mother, they robbed me aloud. So they didn't give me any, uh, transportation or any toys to play.

✓ I didn't have a bike when I was a child. When I was very young, my father and mother raised me strictly, so they didn't give me any transportation or toys to play with.

The original contains several problems: 'robbed me aloud' is incorrect word choice and likely intended meaning is 'raised me aloud' or 'raised me strictly'; use of 'aloud' is wrong (incorrect word choice, not in list) but fits under past tense/context and sentence structure issues. Also sentence run-on and preposition missing after 'play'. Corrected sentence keeps past tense consistent, replaces incorrect phrase with 'raised me strictly' to convey strict upbringing, and adds the preposition 'with' after 'play'. Suggestion: choose correct verbs for intended meaning, split into two sentences for clarity, and include necessary prepositions.

× I think bike is very popular in China. You can see much of the bike everywhere around the street and it's even a city problem to solve.

✓ I think bicycles are very popular in China. You can see many bikes everywhere on the streets, and it's even a city problem to solve.

There are number and article errors: 'bike' should be plural 'bicycles' to match general statement (singular/plural issue). 'Much of the bike' is incorrect quantifier usage; use 'many bikes' (countable noun). 'Around the street' is incorrect preposition and should be 'on the streets'. Also keep subject-verb agreement and plural forms consistent. Suggestion: use plural nouns for general statements, use correct quantifiers for countable nouns, and use appropriate prepositions ('on the streets').