Bike— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Be direct, concise and natural. Start with a clear topic sentence, correct grammar (use past tense), avoid hesitations and repetition, and give one or two specific supporting details using linking words. Also correct word choice (e.g., 'couldn't afford', 'walk').

Ví dụ: No, I didn’t have a bike when I was a child because my parents couldn’t afford one. Instead, I usually walked to school every day, which took about twenty minutes and gave me time to chat with friends.

Gợi ý: Give a clear opinion, then support it with specific reasons and an example. Use linking words (e.g., 'because', 'for example') and avoid filler words. Improve vocabulary by using phrases like 'common', 'widely used', or 'affordable'.

Ví dụ: Yes, I think bicycles are very popular in my country because they are affordable and practical for short trips. For example, many people commute to work on bikes in my neighborhood, and local markets and schools are easily reached by cycling.

× Actually my parents did not afford any bike for me.

✓ Actually my parents could not afford a bike for me.

The original uses 'did not afford' which is not the correct verb for expressing inability to pay in the past. Use 'could not afford' or 'couldn't afford' to indicate lack of financial ability in the past. Also 'any bike' is awkward here; 'a bike' is more natural when referring to one item.

× So I prefer to talk uh, to walk and pre to prefer take uh, to prefer go to school by walk and by.

✓ So I preferred to walk to school.

The original sentence mixes tenses and repeats 'prefer' incorrectly and uses wrong structures like 'to walk' after 'prefer to' in inconsistent tense. Since the question asks about childhood (past), use past form 'preferred'. Use 'walk to school' rather than 'go to school by walk'. Remove filler words and repetition.

× Yes, I think bikes are very popular in our country as I see uh in my country in my surrounding, every person can afford a bike for themselves to go to their workplace and travel.

✓ Yes, I think bikes are very popular in my country; from what I see in my area, most people can afford a bike to get to work and travel locally.

The original has awkward phrasing and redundancy ('in my country' repeated, 'in my surrounding'). Use present simple 'are' correctly but improve word choice: 'most people' is better than 'every person' if generalizing, and 'get to work' and 'travel locally' are natural collocations. 'Can afford a bike for themselves' is wordy; 'can afford a bike' suffices.