Bike— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Be more fluent and concise: start with a clear topic sentence, reduce hesitations, correct grammar (e.g., 'bought me one' or 'bought a bike for me'), and add one or two brief supporting details (reason and memory). Use linking words if you add details.

Ví dụ: Yes, I did. My parents bought me a bike so they didn't have to drive me to school, and I remember riding to class with my friends almost every day.

Gợi ý: Begin with a direct opinion, avoid filler words, use correct countable/uncountable forms (e.g., 'transport' or 'mode of transport'), and give one or two specific reasons or comparisons with linking words (for example, 'because' or 'however').

Ví dụ: Yes, I think bikes are quite popular in my country because they are cheap and convenient for short trips, although many people also use motorbikes and electric trains for longer journeys.

× Absolutely yes. When I was a child my parents bought for me in order to umm. MMM not have to pick me up to school.

✓ Absolutely. When I was a child my parents bought a bike for me so they would not have to pick me up from school.

The original contains several issues: incorrect word order and missing object after 'bought' (should be 'bought a bike for me'), awkward phrase 'in order to umm. MMM not have to' and wrong preposition 'to school' after 'pick me up'. The sentence should use past tense and a purpose clause: 'bought a bike for me so they would not have to pick me up from school.' Use 'from school' as the correct preposition for being picked up at that location.

× From a perspective umm bikes are transportations which is umm popular in my country UMM.

✓ From one perspective, bikes are a popular means of transportation in my country.

Errors include incorrect plural form 'transportations' (uncountable noun: 'transportation' or countable phrase 'means of transportation'), subject-verb agreement with 'which is popular' (should match plural 'bikes' or rephrase), and awkward phrasing 'From a perspective'. Correct version uses 'From one perspective' and 'are a popular means of transportation.'

× Besides there are some kind of transportation such as umm electric train cars and motorbike.

✓ Besides, there are some kinds of transportation, such as electric trains and motorbikes.

'Some kind of' is incorrect with plural examples; use 'some kinds of transportation' or 'some types of transportation.' Also 'electric train cars' is better as 'electric trains' and 'motorbike' should be plural 'motorbikes' to match 'some kinds.' Added comma after 'Besides' for clarity.