Part 1
Giám khảo
Did you have a bike when you were a child?
Thí sinh
No, I didn't have a bike when I was a child. Since I live in Macau, it's not so big and whenever we hang out, my mother will try to drive us, so I didn't really need a bike. Yeah.
Giám khảo
Do you think bikes are popular in your country?
Thí sinh
Umm, I don't think so, because in my car I think many people will choose to drive a car or motorcycle, or maybe they would try to ride a bus when they go out. I don't think bikes are popular in my country.
Did you have a bike when you were a child?
Điểm: 75.0Gợi ý: 注意用更自然和精炼的句子直接回答並給出具體原因。避免用詞重複與口語填充詞(如"yeah"、"umm")。可以用一個主句直接回答,然後用一到兩句具體說明背景(例如地理環境、交通習慣),並使用連接詞使語意連貫。
Ví dụ: No, I didn't have a bike as a child. I grew up in Macau, which is very compact, and my family usually drove everywhere, so there wasn't much need for a bicycle.
Do you think bikes are popular in your country?
Điểm: 72.0Gợi ý: 回答時避免說話含糊並改正錯誤代詞(例如“in my car”應為“in my country”)。先直接給出立場,然後用2句具體理由支持(例如交通習慣、城市規劃、天氣或基礎設施)。使用連接詞如"because"、"for example"來組織內容。
Ví dụ: I don't think bicycles are very popular in my country. Most people prefer cars or motorcycles due to convenience and limited cycling infrastructure, and many also use buses for longer trips.
× Since I live in Macau, it's not so big and whenever we hang out, my mother will try to drive us, so I didn't really need a bike.
✓ Since I lived in Macau, it wasn't very big, and whenever we hung out my mother would drive us, so I didn't really need a bike.
句子描述的是过去的情况(“when I was a child”),因此句中时态应一致使用过去时。原句中混用了现在时(live/it's)和将来/习惯性将来时(will try),与上下文不一致。建议把动词改为过去式:live→lived,it's→it wasn't,whenever we hang out→whenever we hung out,my mother will try to drive→my mother would drive/used to drive。这样时态统一,语义清楚。
× Umm, I don't think so, because in my car I think many people will choose to drive a car or motorcycle, or maybe they would try to ride a bus when they go out.
✓ Umm, I don't think so, because in my country I think many people choose to drive a car or a motorcycle, or maybe they take a bus when they go out.
句子意在陈述一般事实,应使用一般现在时而非将来时或不恰当的短语。原句中有错写“in my car”应为“in my country”,并且“will choose”在陈述习惯或普遍事实时用一般现在时(choose);“ride a bus”也可以更自然地说“take a bus”。此外需在可数名词前加冠词:a motorcycle。建议改为一般现在时并修正词汇以表达常态。