Bike— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Correct factual errors and use precise vocabulary. Start with a clear topic sentence, then add one or two specific supporting details using linking words. Keep it natural and under five sentences. For example, replace ‘‘boy’’ with ‘‘bike’’ and ‘‘rope it’’ with ‘‘ride it’’. Also use appropriate verb forms (e.g., ‘helped me’).

Ví dụ: Yes, I had a bike when I was a child. I often rode it with my friends almost every day around the neighborhood, and it helped me stay fit. In addition, cycling let me explore local parks near my house.

Gợi ý: Organize your answer with a clear topic sentence and logical supporting details, using correct grammar and linking words. Replace vague phrases like ‘you know’ and correct noun/verb forms (e.g., ‘for shopping’ and ‘office workers often use them’). Give one clear example and a brief reason. Avoid redundancy.

Ví dụ: Yes, bikes are very popular in my country. Many people use them for commuting and shopping because they are cheap and eco-friendly. For example, office workers often cycle to work to save money and avoid traffic.

× Yes, I had a boy when I was a child and I often rope it with my friends almost every day around my neighborhood.

✓ Yes, I had a bicycle when I was a child and I often rode it with my friends almost every day around my neighborhood.

The student used 'boy' instead of 'bicycle' (wrong word) and 'rope' instead of 'rode' (wrong verb). These are lexical errors causing singular/plural/confusion with the intended noun and incorrect verb tense/form. 'Had a bicycle' correctly names the object. 'Rode' is the past tense of 'ride' and matches the past time frame 'when I was a child'. Suggestion: learn common nouns related to transport (bicycle, bike) and remember irregular verb forms (ride -> rode).

× I loved it because it can help me stay fit and explore nearby parks.

✓ I loved it because it could help me stay fit and explore nearby parks.

The sentence refers to a past time ('I loved'), so the modal verb should be backshifted to past form. 'Can' is present-tense modal; 'could' is the past-tense equivalent. Using 'could' makes the time reference consistent. Suggestion: match modal verb tense to the main clause's time (past -> could).

× Yes, absolutely because many people use them for commuting, shop, trip, you know they are very cheap and eco friendly.

✓ Yes, absolutely, because many people use them for commuting, shopping and short trips; they are very cheap and eco-friendly.

The original lists mixed noun forms ('commuting, shop, trip') incorrectly. Coordinate items should use parallel forms: either all gerunds (commuting, shopping, travelling) or all plural nouns (commutes, shops, trips). 'Eco friendly' needs a hyphen as a compound adjective before a noun. Suggestion: keep parallel structure in lists and use hyphenation for compound adjectives when appropriate.

× For example during an office worker often use them to get to work or school to save money.

✓ For example, office workers often use them to get to work or school to save money.

The phrase 'during an office worker' is ungrammatical: 'during' is incorrect here and 'an office worker' is singular while the general statement needs plural 'office workers'. Removing 'during' and using plural subject corrects the sentence. Suggestion: use the simple plural for general statements and ensure correct preposition choice or omit it when not needed.