Bike— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: 句子需要更自然與語法正確。回答應先明確回應問題（主題句），接着用一到兩句補充細節，避免多餘重複。注意時態一致（過去式），修正語法錯誤（如“when I my birthday”應為“for my birthday”或“on my birthday”），並用連接詞使句子更流暢。建議把回答控制在最多五句內，例如說明你幾歲、有沒有特別記憶、以及那輛自行車是否常用。

Ví dụ: Yes, I did. My father bought me a bicycle as a birthday present when I was ten, and I used it almost every day to ride to school and play with my friends.

Gợi ý: 回答需更有條理與語法正確。先給出直接答案，然後用一到兩句具體理由或例子支持。避免片段句與不完整從句（例如“Which code shared bikes.”不完整），注意詞彙使用（如“dinner”應為“distance”或“a short ride”若指價格範圍），並説明共享單車的便利與價格時用正確表達。保持語句連貫可用連接詞如“because”或“for example”。

Ví dụ: Yes, I think bicycles are very popular in my country because many people use them for short trips. For example, there are many shared bikes on the streets that you can rent for just a couple of yuan for a short ride, which makes them very convenient.

× I have a bike bought by my father when I my birthday as a birthday gift.

✓ I had a bike bought by my father for my birthday as a birthday gift.

句子中的时间是过去（“when I was young”），应使用与过去时间一致的过去时（had），而不是现在完成时（have）。另外，‘when I my birthday’ 结构错误，应改为 ‘for my birthday’ 表示作为生日礼物。建议：谈过去的事时用过去时（例如 had），并使用正确的介词短语 ‘for my birthday’ 来表示礼物的用途。

× Which code shared bikes.

✓ They have shared bikes that use a QR code.

原句片段 'Which code shared bikes.' 结构不完整，缺少主语和动词，难以理解。应该把信息组合为完整句：主语 + 动词 + 宾语，并明确是通过二维码（QR code）使用的共享自行车。建议：确保每个句子有明确的主语和谓语，表达完整思想。

× We can ride it for dinner only CN¥2.

✓ We can rent/ride one for only CN¥2 for a short trip.

原句中 'ride it for dinner only CN¥2' 介词和短语搭配不当，造成意思模糊。应使用 'for only CN¥2' 表示价格，使用 'for a short trip' 或根据语境改为 'to go to dinner'。此外 'ride one' 或 'rent one' 比 'ride it' 更自然。建议：价格前用 'for only ...'，并明确目的或时长的介词短语。