Bike— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Be clearer and more natural. Start with a direct topic sentence, then give one or two concise supporting details using linking words. Correct grammar (e.g., use past tense and correct nouns) and avoid unclear phrases like “raining wheels.”

Ví dụ: Not really. I owned a bike when I was a child, but it was in very poor condition, so I rarely rode it. For example, the chain often slipped and one wheel was bent, which made riding unsafe.

Gợi ý: Give a structured answer: a direct opinion, then two clear reasons with specific examples. Use accurate vocabulary (e.g., “commute” not “bite underbooks”) and remove filler words. Link reasons clearly with words like “because” or “for example.”

Ví dụ: Yes, bikes are quite popular in my country. Many people use them to commute because they are cheap and convenient; for example, I often see workers cycling to factories in the morning. Also, cycling is good for health, so some people choose bikes for exercise and short trips.

× Not really no.

✓ Not really.

This reply contains a double negative ('Not really no') which is informal and ungrammatical in standard English. Use a single short response such as 'Not really.' to clearly communicate the meaning. Grammar problem type ID:26

× I had one but it was really bad condition and I couldn't drive with it raining wheels so I did not ride a bike when I was a child.

✓ I had one but it was in really bad condition and the wheels were loose, so I did not ride a bike when I was a child.

Multiple issues: missing preposition 'in' before 'really bad condition' and unclear phrase 'raining wheels' which seems to be a lexical error; also awkward clause sequence. Correct by adding the preposition 'in' (preposition error ID 11) and clarifying 'the wheels were loose' (sentence structure). The sentence uses past tense appropriately; keep past tense to match 'when you were a child.' Suggest breaking into two clauses with a clear cause: 'it was in really bad condition' and 'the wheels were loose, so I did not ride it.' Grammar problem type ID:26

× Yes they are and I see a lot of people going on bikes to work, especially the underprivileged people to bite underbooks and it's really nice seeing the bike umm like you could feel what it's good for your health.

✓ Yes, they are. I see a lot of people riding bikes to work, especially underprivileged people, and it's really nice to see because cycling is good for your health.

Several errors: missing commas and sentence boundaries (sentence structure), incorrect verb phrase 'going on bikes' is acceptable but 'riding bikes' is more natural; 'to bite underbooks' is unintelligible and likely a lexical error — replace with 'underprivileged people' without extra phrase; 'seeing the bike' is awkward — use 'see' or 'it's really nice to see.' Also: 'you could feel what it's good for your health' is ungrammatical; correct to 'cycling is good for your health.' Fix subject-verb flow and word choice while maintaining present tense general statement. Primary issues are sentence structure and appropriate verb choice/agreement. Grammar problem type ID:27