BikePart 1 Báo cáo

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Part 1

Giám khảo

Did you have a bike when you were a child?

Thí sinh

Did you have a big win? You're a child.

Giám khảo

Do you think bikes are popular in your country?

Thí sinh

Uh, yes I do. Uh, the colour blue.

Đánh giá

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Tổng: 5.5Trôi chảy và mạch lạc: 5.5Phát âm: 6.0Ngữ pháp: 5.5Từ vựng: 6.0

Part 1

Did you have a bike when you were a child?

Điểm: 25.0

Gợi ý: إجابتك لا ترد على سؤال الفاحص. بدلاً من إعادة صياغة السؤال أو طرح سؤال غير ذي صلة، ابدأ بجملة موضوعية مباشرة ثم أضف تفاصيل داعمة بسيطة. ركز على الإجابة بنعم/لا متبوعة بتفصيل قصير (مثلاً أين وكيف كنت تستخدمها ولماذا كانت مهمة). استخدم رابط منطقي إذا أضفت أكثر من جملة مثل "because" أو "so".

Ví dụ: Yes, I did. I had a small red bicycle that I used to ride around my neighborhood every afternoon because it helped me meet friends and stay active.

Do you think bikes are popular in your country?

Điểm: 30.0

Gợi ý: إجابتك قصيرة وغير محددة وتحتوي على كلام متردد (uh) ومعلومة غير مرتبطة (اللون الأزرق). يجب أن تبدأ بجملة رأي واضحة ثم تدعمها بتفاصيل محددة مثل أسباب الشعبية، أماكن الاستخدام أو مقارنة مع وسائل نقل أخرى. تجنب التردد واملأ الفراغات بحشو معنى أو روابط مثل "because" أو "for example".

Ví dụ: Yes, I think bikes are quite popular, especially in cities where traffic is heavy, because many people use them for short trips and exercise. For example, bike-sharing programs are common in my city.

Ngữ pháp

Sentence structure errors

× Did you have a big win? You're a child.

No, I didn't. I had a bike when I was a child.

The student replied with an irrelevant question and a fragment rather than answering. This is a sentence structure error: the reply should be a complete response to the examiner's past-tense question. Use a negative or positive past-tense statement that matches the examiner's "Did you have...when you were a child?" format. Suggestion: form a full sentence with subject + past-tense verb (I had / I didn't have) and add context if needed. Grammar problem type ID:26

Incorrect use of pronouns

× Uh, yes I do. Uh, the colour blue.

Yes, I think bikes are popular. I like the colour blue.

The student answers the popularity question with a short present-tense 'yes I do' then adds 'the colour blue', which is a fragment that lacks clear reference. This is an incorrect use of pronouns and sentence fragments—the response should use a complete clause that refers to 'bikes' (e.g., 'I think bikes are popular') and then a separate complete sentence to explain 'the colour blue' (e.g., 'I like the colour blue'). Suggestion: use full sentences with clear subjects and verbs and maintain tense consistency for opinions (present simple). Grammar problem type ID:12

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BigLarge; Elder; Important; Ambitious
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