Part 1
Giám khảo
Did you have a bike when you were a child?
Thí sinh
Yes, actually I have a little yellow bike when I was in the primary school. I like to write it all the time.
Giám khảo
Do you think bikes are popular in your country?
Thí sinh
Yes, definitely. MMM bikes are everywhere because of the. We can see it everywhere. Everybody uses it to go to the.
Did you have a bike when you were a child?
Điểm: 53.0Gợi ý: 句子時態和動詞形式不準確,且內容不夠具體與連貫。回答應以主題句直接回答(過去式),然後用1–2句具體細節支持(如誰送的、哪裡騎、感受或頻率)。避免冗長或無意義的句子。可以使用連接詞如“and”或“so”來保持流暢。
Ví dụ: Yes, I did. When I was in primary school I had a small yellow bicycle that my parents bought for me. I rode it almost every day around my neighborhood and felt very proud whenever I could ride without training wheels.
Do you think bikes are popular in your country?
Điểm: 38.0Gợi ý: 回答不完整且有語言中斷,缺少具體原因與例子。應先給出直接判斷句,然後用1–2句具體原因或例子支持(如交通擁堵、價格便宜、城市政策、共享單車)。使用連接詞如“because”或“so”來連接理由,並注意完整句子結構。
Ví dụ: Yes, definitely. Bicycles are very common in my country because many people use them to avoid traffic jams and they are cheap to maintain. For example, shared-bike services are available in most cities, so lots of commuters ride bikes to work or school every day.
× Yes, actually I have a little yellow bike when I was in the primary school.
✓ Yes, actually I had a little yellow bike when I was in primary school.
句子描述过去的情况,应使用过去时。原句中使用现在时态“have”与时间状语“when I was in the primary school”不一致,且“the primary school”在这里通常不加定冠词,换成“primary school”。建议:把动词改为过去式“had”,并将“the primary school”改为“primary school”。
× I like to write it all the time.
✓ I liked to ride it all the time. (或 I used to ride it all the time.)
原句中的动词“write”与语境不符(骑自行车应使用“ride”),且描述过去习惯动作应使用过去时或“used to”结构。应把动词换为“ride”,并用过去式“liked”或“used to”。建议:根据要表达的意思使用“I used to ride it all the time.”或“I liked riding it all the time.”。
× Yes, definitely. MMM bikes are everywhere because of the. We can see it everywhere. Everybody uses it to go to the.
✓ Yes, definitely. MMM bikes are everywhere because of their convenience. We can see them everywhere. Everybody uses them to go to work/school.
原句存在不完整的原因短语“because of the.”、代词不一致和不完整的目的地短语。‘bikes’为复数,指代时应使用复数代词“them”而不是“it”。此外“because of the.”后面缺少名词或名词短语,需补全原因(例如“their convenience”)。最后“to go to the.”缺少目的地,需要补全为“to go to work/school”等。建议:补全不完整的短语,使用复数代词与复数名词一致(them),并明确目的地或用途。