Part 1
Giám khảo
Did you have a bike when you were a child?
Thí sinh
I think no, because when I was try I often go to home because I can send when I when I I'm home together with my.
Giám khảo
Do you think bikes are popular in your country?
Thí sinh
Yes, I think pies are popular in my country because people often, uh, use it so that go to the. Go to work and go to.
Did you have a bike when you were a child?
Điểm: 28.0Gợi ý: Your answer is unclear and contains many grammatical and coherence errors. Start with a clear topic sentence directly answering the question (e.g. “No, I didn’t.”), then add one or two specific supporting details with linking words. Use past tense consistently and simple, correct sentences. For example, say why you didn’t have a bike (e.g. family reasons, transport options, safety). Keep it concise (no more than 3–4 sentences).
Ví dụ: No, I didn’t have a bike when I was a child. Instead, I usually walked home or my parents drove me because our neighborhood wasn’t very safe for cycling. As a result, I didn’t learn to ride until I was a teenager.
Do you think bikes are popular in your country?
Điểm: 40.0Gợi ý: Your answer gives a basic opinion but is muddled by pronunciation and incomplete sentences. Begin with a clear topic sentence (e.g. “Yes, I think bikes are quite popular.”), then give specific supporting reasons and use linking words such as “because” or “for example.” Mention who uses bikes and for what purposes (commuting, exercise), and finish with a short consequence or comparison. Speak slowly and finish sentences to improve clarity.
Ví dụ: Yes, I think bikes are quite popular in my country because many people use them to commute to work and school. For example, in cities with heavy traffic, cycling is faster and cheaper than driving. Therefore, you can see many dedicated bike lanes and commuters riding every day.
× I think no, because when I was try I often go to home because I can send when I when I I'm home together with my.
✓ I don't think so, because when I was a child I often went home and could go home with my family.
Errors: incorrect negation 'I think no' should be 'I don't think so'; 'when I was try' is ungrammatical and likely meant 'when I was a child' (word choice); present tense 'I often go to home' should be past simple 'I often went home' to match 'when I was a child'; 'go to home' uses wrong preposition and article — use 'go home' (no article); 'I can send when I when I I'm home together with my' is fragmented and unclear: corrected to 'could go home with my family' using past ability 'could' to match past context and supplying the missing noun 'family'. Suggestion: ensure tense consistency (use past tense for past situations), use correct negation forms, and use correct collocations like 'go home' and include necessary nouns for clarity.
× Yes, I think pies are popular in my country because people often, uh, use it so that go to the. Go to work and go to.
✓ Yes, I think bikes are popular in my country because people often use them to go to work and to travel around.
Errors: 'pies' is a wrong word probably for 'bikes' (word choice error); 'pies are popular' vs intended 'bikes are popular' — if plural noun is correct, keep plural 'bikes'; pronoun agreement 'people ... use it' is incorrect because 'people' and 'bikes' require plural pronoun 'them'; sentence fragments 'so that go to the. Go to work and go to.' are incomplete. Correction fixes noun, plural pronoun agreement, and completes the purpose phrase: 'use them to go to work and to travel around'. Suggestion: choose correct vocabulary, match pronouns to noun number, and complete clauses (use infinitive 'to go' to express purpose).