Part 1
Giám khảo
Did you have a bike when you were a child?
Thí sinh
No I didn't because my parents worry about myself and and not good at using bike.
Giám khảo
Do you think bikes are popular in your country?
Thí sinh
No, I don't because people usually take a subway or take a taxis or take other public transport for work.
Did you have a bike when you were a child?
Điểm: 52.0Gợi ý: 句子需要更自然、语法更准确,并提供简短的补充细节。注意时态和主谓一致,避免重复词汇。可以先直接回答(主题句),然后用一两句说明原因或具体情形,并用连接词使表达更连贯。例如说明父母担心安全或交通环境,或说明是否曾尝试学骑。
Ví dụ: No, I didn't. My parents were worried about my safety, so they never bought me a bicycle. Besides, I wasn't confident riding one when I was young, so I used to walk or take public transport instead.
Do you think bikes are popular in your country?
Điểm: 64.0Gợi ý: 回答要更精确并使用更合适的词汇和连词。先给出直接判断,再用具体原因和少量细节支持观点,避免词汇重复(如 multiple 'take')。可提及城市交通状况、通勤距离或基础设施等作为支持。
Ví dụ: Not really. In big cities most people prefer the subway or taxis for commuting because journeys can be long and bike lanes are limited. However, cycling is more common in smaller towns or among fitness enthusiasts.
× No I didn't because my parents worry about myself and and not good at using bike.
✓ No, I didn't because my parents were worried about me and I wasn't good at riding a bike.
问题类型:代词使用不当,以及其他语法问题。说明:原句中用“myself”不合适,应该用宾格“me”来指代“我”。另外原句还有时态和表达不自然的问题:父母在过去对你担心,应使用过去时“were worried”;“not good at using bike” 表达不地道,常用短语是“good at riding a bike”,并且要在否定时用“wasn't”。建议:把“myself”改为“me”,把“worry”改为过去式“were worried”,并将“not good at using bike”改为“wasn't good at riding a bike”。
× No, I don't because people usually take a subway or take a taxis or take other public transport for work.
✓ No, I don't, because people usually take the subway, a taxi, or other public transport to go to work.
问题类型:冠词使用不当及名词单复数不当。说明:1) “a subway”/“the subway”:在泛指某地的地铁时通常用定冠词“the subway”。2) “take a taxis” 中“a”与复数“taxis”矛盾,应改为单数“a taxi”或复数“taxis”但无需不定冠词。3) 习惯搭配为“take the subway / take a taxi / take other public transport”。此外,为表达“去上班”常用短语“to go to work”。建议:将“a subway”改为“the subway”,将“a taxis”改为“a taxi”,并补全短语“to go to work”。