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Part 1

Giám khảo

Did you have a bike when you were a child?

Thí sinh

Yes, my father gave me a bike when I was 10 years old, but I can't ride it until now.

Giám khảo

Do you think bikes are popular in your country?

Thí sinh

Of course, people always ride a bike to go shopping, goes to school or do any other things.

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Part 1

Did you have a bike when you were a child?

Điểm: 55.0

Gợi ý: 总体回答能表达意思,但存在时态和细节问题,句子结构不自然且信息不足。建议:1) 修正时态与语法,例如将“can't ride it until now”改为“couldn't ride it at the time”或“still can’t ride it”;2) 用一到两句补充具体细节(比如为什么不会骑、是否后来学会或有趣的经历);3) 控制在最多5个句子内并使用连词(e.g. because, so)使表达更连贯。示例改进点:说明原因(怕摔/没有学)、时间线(当时/后来)和结果。

Ví dụ: Yes, my father gave me a bike when I was ten, but I couldn't ride it at the time because I was afraid of falling. Later I took a few lessons from a neighbour, so I gradually became more confident and learned to ride.

Do you think bikes are popular in your country?

Điểm: 60.0

Gợi ý: 回答表达了肯定态度,但存在语法错误和泛泛而谈的问题。建议:1) 修正语法(主谓一致,例如“people always ride bikes to go shopping, go to school or do other things”);2) 使用具体细节或例子(比如在城市/农村更普遍,或提到共享单车的流行、环境和交通原因);3) 使用连接词(for example, because)使论述更有层次。

Ví dụ: Yes, bikes are very popular in my country. For example, many students ride bikes to school and people use them for short trips to the market because they are cheap and convenient. Recently, bike-sharing services have also made cycling more common in cities.

Ngữ pháp

8: Verb + -ing form

× Yes, my father gave me a bike when I was 10 years old, but I can't ride it until now.

Yes, my father gave me a bike when I was 10 years old, but I haven't been able to ride it until now.

原句使用了 can't ride 表达从过去到现在一直不能骑的状态,但与时间状语 until now(直到现在)连用时应使用完成时态(现在完成或现在完成进行),表示从过去到现在的持续或结果。建议使用现在完成时(have/has + 过去分词)或现在完成进行时(have/has been + -ing),此处用 haven't been able to ride 更自然。建议平时注意:描述从过去持续到现在的情况要用现在完成时,而不是一般现在时或情态动词的现在时。

6: Present tense issue

× Of course, people always ride a bike to go shopping, goes to school or do any other things.

Of course, people always ride a bike to go shopping, go to school or do any other things.

原句在列举并列动词时出现主谓不一致:主语是复数 people,动词应使用原形(不加-s),但句中用了 goes(第三人称单数形式)和 do(在并列结构中也应与前面的 ride 一致为原形)。因此应改为 ride ... , go ... or do ...。另外,建议把 a bike 改成 bikes 也更自然(people ride bikes),但根据题目要求只改列举动词一致问题。日常写作中,注意并列动词要与主语一致;当主语为复数或泛指 people 时,动词不用第三人称单数-s。

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