Part 1
Giám khảo
Did you have a bike when you were a child?
Thí sinh
Yes, I have.
Giám khảo
Do you think bikes are popular in your country?
Thí sinh
Of course in many cities it have the mobile bike for people.
Did you have a bike when you were a child?
Điểm: 40.0Gợi ý: 回答时时态和用词不准确,句子过短且缺乏细节。建议用正确的过去时直接回答,并补充1–2个支持句,说明何时得到、如何使用或对你的意义。使用连接词使回答更流畅。
Ví dụ: Yes, I did. I got my first bike when I was seven and rode it to school every day. It helped me become more independent and I spent many afternoons exploring the neighbourhood with my friends.
Do you think bikes are popular in your country?
Điểm: 45.0Gợi ý: 语法和表达有错误(主谓不一致、词序不自然),信息也比较模糊。建议先给出直接观点,然后用一两句具体例子说明(例如共享单车普及、城市使用场景或数据),并使用连接词使句子连贯。
Ví dụ: Yes, I think bikes are very popular, especially in big cities. For example, bike-sharing schemes are common and many people use them for short trips to work or the shops, which reduces traffic and is quite convenient.
× Yes, I have.
✓ Yes, I did.
问题类型(编号6):现在时态问题。原句“Yes, I have.” 在回答过去时的提问“Did you have a bike when you were a child?” 时使用了现在时/现在完成时形式,时态不匹配。正确应该用简单过去时“did”或完整回答“I did”或“Yes, I had.” 建议在回答关于过去的事情时使用一般过去时,例如:“Yes, I did.” 或 “Yes, I had a bike.”
× Of course in many cities it have the mobile bike for people.
✓ Of course, in many cities there are mobile bikes for people.
问题类型(编号27):主谓一致/结构错误。原句存在多处问题:1) 使用代词“it”不合适,句子需要存在句型“There is/are”来说明某物的存在(对应编号3也相关);2) 主语复数“mobile bikes” 与动词“have”不一致且语序不自然;3) “have the mobile bike for people” 表达不地道。建议使用存在结构“There are”并使名词复数一致:例如 “There are mobile bikes” 或 “There are public/shared bikes” 并在句首加逗号分隔状语,完整句子为 “Of course, in many cities there are mobile bikes for people.”