Bike— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Improve grammar (use past tense and articles), reduce hesitation and redundancy, and add a brief specific detail. Start with a clear topic sentence, then use one or two supporting details with a linking word. Keep it to 2–3 sentences.

Ví dụ: Yes, I had a bike when I was a child. My father bought it for me as a reward because I got high marks in my school exams, and I used it to ride to my friends’ houses every weekend.

Gợi ý: Correct grammar and word choice, remove repetitions and hesitations, and give a clearer reason with a linking word and a specific example. Use present simple for general facts and avoid incorrect verbs (e.g., 'ride' not 'write').

Ví dụ: Yes, bikes are quite popular in my country because they are affordable and easy to use. For example, many older people prefer riding bicycles for short trips to the market instead of buying a motorcycle or a car.

× Yes, I have a bike when I was a child.

✓ Yes, I had a bike when I was a child.

Error type IDs: 5 and 26. The student mixed present simple 'have' with the past time phrase 'when I was a child'. Use past tense 'had' to match the past time reference. Suggestion: use past tense for actions or states that happened in the past (I had, I went, I lived).

× When I was child my father bought me bike because umm, because I got a greater mark umm, examination.

✓ When I was a child, my father bought me a bike because I got a higher mark in the examination.

Error type IDs: 22, 1, 26, and 13. Missing articles: 'a child' and 'a bike' require the indefinite article 'a'. 'Greater mark' is unnatural; use 'higher mark'. Also add preposition 'in' before 'the examination'. Suggestions: always include appropriate articles for singular countable nouns and use natural adjective collocations (higher mark). Add necessary prepositions for nouns like 'in the examination.'

× Yes, I do think bikes are popular in my country because umm there has many people who getting older cannot cannot write a motorcycle or used car when they want to.

✓ Yes, I think bikes are popular in my country because there are many older people who cannot ride a motorcycle or a car when they want to.

Error type IDs: 3, 27, 8 and 12. 'There has many people' is incorrect: use 'There are many people' for plural subjects. 'Getting older' should be 'older' to describe people; avoid unnecessary gerund. Repeated 'cannot' removed. 'Write' is wrong verb; use 'ride' for motorcycles and 'drive' for cars—here 'ride... or drive a car' is preferable, or simply 'ride a motorcycle or a car' if simplifying. Also add article 'a' before 'car'. Suggestions: use 'there are' for existence with plural nouns, use adjectives like 'older' rather than gerund 'getting older' in this context, and choose correct verbs for vehicles (ride, drive).