Part 1
Giám khảo
Did you have a bike when you were a child?
Thí sinh
Yeah, when I was young I got a bike which is in blue and that's my favorite color, Umm, And my home is not far away from my school, so I go to school by bike every day.
Giám khảo
Do you think bikes are popular in your country?
Thí sinh
Umm, well, to be honest I don't think bike is very popular in my country because umm, between the buildings in my country there are always some white roads which is always passed by some cars. But umm, bike are more useful in the umm, rural area or in the countryside, you know?
Did you have a bike when you were a child?
Điểm: 64.0Gợi ý: 回答要更直接有条理,减少语气词和重复,注意时态一致并控制在5句以内。可以先给出主题句(有/没有),然后补充具体细节(颜色、使用频率、通勤方式),最后一句可简单说明感受或原因。避免过多的“umm”和重复信息。
Ví dụ: Yes. I had a blue bike when I was a child, which was my favorite color. I used it to ride to school because my home was close by, so cycling was convenient. Riding my bike felt fun and gave me a sense of freedom.
Do you think bikes are popular in your country?
Điểm: 58.0Gợi ý: 回答需要更清晰的观点句和有逻辑的支持理由,减少填充词并改正语法(单复数、冠词)。用连接词(however, although, because)组织理由,并提供具体例子或对比城市与乡村的差异。控制句子数量并保持简洁。
Ví dụ: I don't think bicycles are very popular in my country. In cities many main roads are dominated by cars, making cycling less safe, but in rural areas people still use bikes for short trips and farm work. Therefore bicycles are more common in the countryside than in urban centres.
× I don't think bike is very popular in my country
✓ I don't think bikes are very popular in my country
句子中“bike”应使用复数“bikes”。这里说的是一般性陈述(泛指在国家中自行车是否流行),应使用复数名词或不定冠词+单数形式(a bike),但原句没有冠词,导致单复数错误。建议在泛指可数名词时使用复数(bikes)或使用不定冠词(a bike)。
× between the buildings in my country there are always some white roads which is always passed by some cars
✓ between the buildings in my country there are always some white roads which are always passed by some cars
关系从句中谓语动词要与先行词“roads”(复数)保持一致,原句使用“is”与复数不一致。应改为“are”。此外“passed by some cars”语法上可接受,但要注意时态一致性。建议把关系从句的动词与先行词数保持一致。
× But umm, bike are more useful in the umm, rural area or in the countryside
✓ But umm, bikes are more useful in the umm, rural areas or in the countryside
此处表达泛指“农村地区”时应使用复数名词“bikes”或使用不可数/单数加冠词形式。原句“bike are”同时出现单数名词和复数动词,主谓不一致。还应把“rural area”改为复数“rural areas”或使用“the rural area”根据上下文决定。建议使用“bikes are”并与复数名词“areas”搭配。
× I got a bike which is in blue and that's my favorite color
✓ I got a bike which is blue and that's my favorite color
短语“which is in blue”不是自然的表达。表示颜色时通常用“which is blue”或者“which came in blue”。“in blue”有时表示穿蓝色衣物,但用于物品颜色时不常见。建议使用“which is blue”或“which came in blue”。
× so I go to school by bike every day
✓ so I went to school by bike every day (when I was a child)
上下文为过去时间(Examiner问“Did you have a bike when you were a child?”),后句应使用过去时“went”而不是现在时“go”。原句时态不一致。建议在描述过去习惯时使用过去时,例如“went to school by bike every day”。