Bike— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Be more concise, reduce fillers (umm), use correct verb tenses and articles, and add one specific detail. Start with a clear topic sentence, then give a supporting detail with a linking word. Keep it under five sentences.

Ví dụ: Yes, I did. I loved riding my bicycle and spent a lot of free time cycling around my hometown with my father on weekends. For example, we often rode to the nearby riverbank, which was about three kilometres away, and I remember feeling very proud when I learned to ride without training wheels.

Gợi ý: Make the response clearer and grammatical: give a direct opinion, then support it with a specific reason and example. Avoid vague phrases like 'that much' and unfinished clauses. Use linking words (however, because, for example). Keep it to two or three sentences.

Ví dụ: Not very popular overall, but bicycles are common in some areas. For example, many students and young workers ride bikes to school or nearby jobs because it is cheap and faster than walking, especially in crowded neighbourhoods.

× Yes, I did have a bike when I was a child because I liked riding bike as a child and I, umm, I had many umm, free time.

✓ Yes, I had a bike when I was a child because I liked riding a bike and I had a lot of free time.

Redundant use of auxiliary 'did' in an affirmative past-tense sentence is incorrect; use simple past 'had'. 'Riding bike' requires the article 'a' before 'bike'. 'Many free time' is uncountable, so use 'a lot of free time' or 'much free time'. Remove filler words like 'umm' for clarity.

× So I ride bicycle and through my hometown with my father during the weekends.

✓ So I rode my bicycle around my hometown with my father on weekends.

The sentence refers to past habitual action, so use past simple 'rode' not present 'ride'. 'Ride bicycle' needs a possessive or article: 'my bicycle'. Use correct preposition 'around' for moving through a place and 'on weekends' is the standard phrase (not 'during the weekends'). 'Through' is less natural here.

× I wouldn't say that bikes are that much popular, but I think in some areas many young people ride bicycles so I too they use bicycles to get to their school and work because it's more convenient and you can't.

✓ I wouldn't say that bikes are very popular, but I think in some areas many young people ride bicycles, and they also use them to get to school and work because it's more convenient.

'That much popular' is non-idiomatic; use 'very popular'. The clause 'so I too they use bicycles' is ungrammatical; restructure to 'and they also use them'. Avoid redundant 'their' before 'school' unless specifying 'their school'; 'get to school' is standard. The fragment 'and you can't' is incomplete and should be removed or completed; here it was removed to keep meaning clear.