Part 1
Giám khảo
Did you have a bike when you were a child?
Thí sinh
Did you have a back when you were a child?
Giám khảo
Do you think bikes are popular in your country?
Thí sinh
Yes, I think bicycles are very popular among young people in my country because they are an A convenient way to get around and to go to school. For example, many of my students prefer riding bicycles to university to award attractive.
Did you have a bike when you were a child?
Điểm: 30.0Gợi ý: 回答有明显的发音错误和拼写错误(back vs. bike),而且没有直接回答问题。首先要确保听清并正确复述问题,然后直接给出主题句(有或没有),随后可用一两句具体细节补充。练习常见关键词的发音并在心中先构思一句简短明确的答案再说。
Ví dụ: Yes, I did. I had a small red bicycle when I was seven, and I used to ride it to the park every weekend. It helped me feel independent and confident as a child.
Do you think bikes are popular in your country?
Điểm: 55.0Gợi ý: 回答包含相关观点和例子,但存在语法错误、词汇使用不当和表达不连贯(如“A convenient”、“to award attractive”)。需要简洁的主题句,加1–2句具体细节并用连接词(because, for example)。注意正确搭配词语(e.g. “a convenient way” 不用大写,且不要说“to award attractive”)。强化句子结构练习,避免多余或错误的短语。
Ví dụ: Yes, I think bicycles are quite popular, especially among young people, because they are an inexpensive and convenient way to travel. For example, many university students ride bikes to campus to save money and avoid traffic.
× Did you have a back when you were a child?
✓ Did you have a bike when you were a child?
原句把“bike”(自行车)误写为“back”。这是拼写/词语使用错误,导致句子意思不通。根据考官问题应为询问“自行车”,因此把单词更正为“bike”。建议:写作或听写时要注意单词拼写与所要表达的名词是否匹配,读回自己的句子以检查是否有拼写错误。
× they are an A convenient way to get around and to go to school.
✓ they are a convenient way to get around and go to school.
原句中出现了不必要且错误的冠词组合“an A”,并且不需要在第二个动词前使用不定式to重复(可用并列动词)。错误类型属于冠词使用不当和冗余的动词不定式。建议:冠词前要根据后面单词发音决定使用a或an;不要重复不必要的“to”,保持句子简洁。
× For example, many of my students prefer riding bicycles to university to award attractive.
✓ For example, many of my students prefer riding bicycles to university because it is attractive/because it is convenient.
原句中的“to award attractive”没有意义,疑为词语搭配或拼写错误,导致句子结构混乱。应使用连词(如because)引出原因,或改为合适的形容词短语(e.g. because it is attractive/convenient)。建议:表达原因时用because、so或using名词短语;检查所用词是否与上下文搭配合理(例如“attractive”通常形容事物吸引人,但不直接跟“to”构成‘to award attractive’)。