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Part 1

Giám khảo

Did you have a bike when you were a child?

Thí sinh

No, I didn't have a bike when I was a child.

Giám khảo

Do you think bikes are popular in your country?

Thí sinh

No, I don't think so because they all go for work by the shuttle bus normally.

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Part 1

Did you have a bike when you were a child?

Điểm: 60.0

Gợi ý: 回答过于简短,缺少细节和支撑句。建议先用一句主题句直接回答,然后补充一到两句描写原因或相关经历,并使用连接词使语流更自然。例如说明家庭情况、出行方式或是否学习骑车等细节。注意句子不要超过五句,保持用词自然。

Ví dụ: No, I didn't have a bike when I was a child. My family couldn't afford one at the time, so I usually walked to school or took public transport. Later, I learned to ride on a borrowed bike from a neighbor, which was quite memorable.

Do you think bikes are popular in your country?

Điểm: 55.0

Gợi ý: 答案结构简单但表达不够清晰和具体。建议先给出简短直接的观点,然后用一到两句具体说明原因并提供例子或比较,并使用连接词(like, because, therefore, however)使逻辑更连贯。注意修正主语不明确(如"they"指代),并使用更恰当的词汇如"commute by shuttle bus"或"public transport"。

Ví dụ: I don't think bikes are very popular in my country. Most people commute by shuttle bus or other public transport because distances are long and the weather can be unsuitable for cycling. As a result, you rarely see many cyclists during rush hour in the city.

Ngữ pháp

Present tense issue

× No, I don't think so because they all go for work by the shuttle bus normally.

No, I don't think so because they usually go to work by shuttle bus.

句子存在多处与习惯用法和时态相关的问题: 1) “they all go for work” 不符合地道表达,英语中常用 go to work 表示“去上班”,不加 for。应改为 go to work。 2) “by the shuttle bus normally” 词序不当,副词 normally(通常)放在动词前或句末更自然;而“by shuttle bus” 更常见的说法是不加定冠词 the,表示一种交通方式。综合可改为 usually go to work by shuttle bus 或 usually go to work by shuttle buses,但更简洁为 “usually go to work by shuttle bus”。 建议:把副词(usually/normally)放在动词前或句尾,使用 go to work 表示“去上班”,并把交通方式用 by shuttle bus(不加 the)来表达泛指。

Past tense issue

× No, I didn't have a bike when I was a child.

No, I didn't have a bike when I was a child.

该句时态使用正确:询问过去是否拥有某物时使用过去式 did n't have 是恰当的。句子不需要修改。

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