Part 1
Giám khảo
Did you have a bike when you were a child?
Thí sinh
Yes, I do have a bike. I usually ride a bike to school when I was in the middle school.
Giám khảo
Do you think bikes are popular in your country?
Thí sinh
That's a good question. In my opinion bike is popular as a sport. People usually ride bikes for fun, but they usually. Ride electrical bikes for transportation.
Did you have a bike when you were a child?
Điểm: 62.0Gợi ý: 你的回答有時態和語法錯誤,且表達不夠精簡具體。回答應該用過去時描述兒時經歷,先給出主題句再加一兩個具體細節,用連接詞使句子連貫。避免冗長或重複。
Ví dụ: Yes, I had a bike when I was a child. I rode it to school almost every day during middle school, which took me about 15 minutes each way, and I used it to run small errands on weekends.
Do you think bikes are popular in your country?
Điểm: 58.0Gợi ý: 回答結構不夠清晰,有語法和標點問題,表達也不夠具體。應先直接回答問題,然後用連接詞給出原因和具體例子,避免句子中斷和重複。可區分休閒騎行與通勤用車來說明。
Ví dụ: Yes, bikes are quite popular in my country, but in different ways. For instance, many people cycle for sport or leisure on weekends, while a growing number use electric bikes for daily commuting because they are faster and more convenient in city traffic.
× Yes, I do have a bike.
✓ Yes, I had a bike.
原句考官问的是过去是否拥有(Did you have...?),应使用过去时。原句用现在时“do have”与提问时态不一致。建议:回答过去经历时使用过去式,例如 “I had a bike.” 或更自然地 “Yes, I did.”。
× I usually ride a bike to school when I was in the middle school.
✓ I usually rode a bike to school when I was in middle school.
句子中出现了时间状语“when I was in middle school”,表示过去,经常性的动作应使用过去时“rode”。同时英语中常说“middle school”(不带冠词)。建议:在描述过去习惯时使用过去时(used to / would / past simple),如 “I usually rode...” 或 “I used to ride...”。
× In my opinion bike is popular as a sport.
✓ In my opinion, biking is popular as a sport. OR In my opinion, the bicycle is popular as a sport.
原句缺少冠词或使用名词形式不自然。表达某项运动时常用动名词“biking”或复数/带冠词的名词“the bicycle”。建议:用动名词或正确加冠词的名词来表达“作为一项运动很受欢迎”,例如 “biking is popular” 或 “the bicycle is popular”。
× People usually ride bikes for fun, but they usually. Ride electrical bikes for transportation.
✓ People usually ride bikes for fun, but they usually ride electric bikes for transportation.
原句被错误地分成两句并且“electrical”用词不当,应为“electric”。此外重复使用“usually”可以保留一个即可。建议:合并为一句并修正形容词,例:"People usually ride bikes for fun, but they usually ride electric bikes for transportation."