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Part 1

Giám khảo

Did you have a bike when you were a child?

Thí sinh

Oh sorry I never have a back whenever child because my parents they think the back is dangerous when I take back take the bag on the roads.

Giám khảo

Do you think bikes are popular in your country?

Thí sinh

Yes, of course, bags still very popular in our country.

Đánh giá

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Part 1

Did you have a bike when you were a child?

Điểm: 34.0

Gợi ý: 首先要纠正语法和发音,减少重复并使回答简洁明确。可以用一句话直接回答,再补充一到两句具体原因或细节。注意名词拼写(bike)、时态(had)、主谓一致(I never had)、连词使用和语序。练习把句子分为主题句和支持句,例如:I didn't have a bike as a child. Then give a reason and a brief personal comment. 另外注意发音清晰以免影响沟通。

Ví dụ: I didn’t have a bike when I was a child. My parents thought riding on busy roads was dangerous, so they didn’t allow me to ride. As a result, I learned to walk and use public transport instead.

Do you think bikes are popular in your country?

Điểm: 40.0

Gợi ý: 回答要直接且避免拼写/用词错误(bike 而不是 bag)。给出具体细节支持观点,例如谁常用自行车、在哪些城市、用途(通勤、休闲)、简单比较(比起汽车更便宜/环保)。使用连接词(for example, because, especially)使表达更连贯。

Ví dụ: Yes, bikes are still very popular in my country because they are cheap and convenient. For example, many students and factory workers cycle to work in smaller cities, and some people prefer them for short trips to avoid traffic.

Ngữ pháp

Past tense issue

× Oh sorry I never have a back whenever child because my parents they think the back is dangerous when I take back take the bag on the roads.

Oh, sorry. I never had a bike when I was a child because my parents thought bikes were dangerous when I rode them or when I took a bike on the road.

句子主要错误是时态使用不当。原句中使用了现在时(have/think/take)而叙述的是过去的事实,应使用过去时(had/thought/rode/took或 rode them/on the road)。另外句中多次出现“back”和“bag”等拼写错误,应为“bike”;还有重复和冗余(例如“they think”与主句主语重复),需要简化句子结构并改用正确的动词搭配(ride a bike / take a bike on the road)。建议:1)叙述过去事情时统一使用一般过去时;2)注意常用搭配,如 ride a bike, take a bike on the road;3)检查拼写并删除多余的代词。

Singular and plural issue

× Yes, of course, bags still very popular in our country.

Yes, of course, bikes are still very popular in our country.

句子有名词单复数错误和缺少系动词。原句用“bags”与上下文不符且应为“bikes”;同时缺少动词“are”。正确表达为“bikes are still very popular”。建议:1)确认名词形式(单数或复数)与语境一致;2)简单当前陈述需用现在时系动词“are”;3)检查拼写(bike)。

Từ vựng trọng tâm

BackRear; Reverse; Backward
DangerousMenacing; Hazardous
PopularWell-liked; Nonspecialist; Widespread; Mass
SorrySad; Full of pity; Regretful; Pitiful; Apologies
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