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Part 1

Giám khảo

Did you have a bike when you were a child?

Thí sinh

Yes, when I am at primary school my parents bought a bike for me.

Giám khảo

Do you think bikes are popular in your country?

Thí sinh

Yes, because bicycles are very convenient. People can ride a bike to everywhere without traffic jam.

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Part 1

Did you have a bike when you were a child?

Điểm: 58.0

Gợi ý: 句子时态和语法需要纠正,并且回答可以更自然、更具体。建议使用正确的过去时(e.g. "was" 而不是 "am"),并在主题句后加一到两句具体细节,例如自行车的颜色、是否常骑、在哪里骑以及你对它的感受。避免冗长或重复,每个回答不超过5句。

Ví dụ: Yes. I had a small red bicycle when I was in primary school. My parents bought it for me on my eighth birthday, and I rode it to school and around the neighbourhood almost every day. I loved the freedom it gave me and I remember practicing tricks with my friends.

Do you think bikes are popular in your country?

Điểm: 64.0

Gợi ý: 回答内容方向正确,但需更自然流畅并补充具体细节或例子来支持观点。建议使用连接词(e.g. "because", "for example", "so"),并注意措辞(如 "everywhere" 与 "without traffic jam" 的搭配不够准确)。可以说明在哪些人群中更流行或在哪些场合常见。保持回答简洁,最多五句。

Ví dụ: Yes, I think bikes are very popular in my country because they're cheap and practical. For example, many students and commuters use bicycles to travel short distances in cities to avoid traffic and save money. In some areas, there are even dedicated bike lanes which makes cycling safer and more convenient.

Ngữ pháp

Present tense issue

× Yes, when I am at primary school my parents bought a bike for me.

Yes, when I was at primary school my parents bought a bike for me.

原句时态混用:句子是描述过去发生的事(父母买了自行车),因此从句中的时间状语从句也应使用过去时。原句中使用了现在时态“am”,与主句过去时“bought”不一致。建议将“am”改为过去式“was”,以保持时态一致性。

Incorrect use of prepositions

× People can ride a bike to everywhere without traffic jam.

People can ride a bike everywhere without traffic jams.

错误点在于介词和可数名词:1) 英语中通常直接用副词“everywhere”而不是“to everywhere”。2) “traffic jam”作为可数名词,表示“堵车”的情况时常用复数或不可数,用复数“traffic jams”更自然。建议去掉“to”,并把“traffic jam”改为复数形式“traffic jams”。

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