Bike— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Your answer is very short and does not follow the basic structure. Give a direct topic sentence and add one or two brief supporting details to make the response natural and informative. Use linking words if you add more than one idea. Keep answers concise (maximum about 3–4 sentences).

Ví dụ: No, I didn’t have a bike when I was a child. My parents preferred that I walk or take public transport because our neighborhood was busy and they worried about safety. Later, I learned to cycle as a teenager, mainly for exercise and short trips.

Gợi ý: Your answer is unclear and contains many grammatical errors and confusing vocabulary (e.g., “bike ticket,” “CCS,” “PE people”). Start with a clear topic sentence stating your opinion, then give 2–3 specific supporting details (e.g., who rides bikes, reasons for popularity, changes over time). Use linking words (for example, however, also, nowadays) to organize ideas. Use correct and relevant vocabulary (bicycle, cycling, commuters, recreational cyclists, expensive). Keep it to 3–4 sentences and avoid invented terms.

Ví dụ: Yes, cycling is fairly popular in the UK nowadays. For example, many commuters use bicycles in cities because of bike lanes and the convenience of avoiding traffic. However, high-quality bikes can be expensive, so some people still prefer public transport or cheaper models.

× It is popular in my country, UK, like people used to communicate via bike ticket.

✓ Bicycles are popular in my country, the UK; people used to communicate using bike tickets.

The original sentence uses 'It' to refer to 'bikes' which is incorrect pronoun reference and unclear. Also 'UK' needs 'the' and 'communicate via' is awkward; 'bicycles' plural agrees with 'are popular'. Use a clear noun, correct article, and a better preposition ('using').

× Many people have different kinds of bike tickets along with having different CCS and style and all that ticket.

✓ Many people have different kinds of bike tickets and different CCs and styles.

The original has redundant phrases ('along with having'), inconsistent plural forms ('style' vs 'tickets') and unclear abbreviation 'CCS'; corrected sentence makes nouns plural and removes redundancy. Ensure consistent number agreement and parallel structure.

× So it's a now it's become a luxury thing.

✓ So now it has become a luxury item.

The original repeats 'it's' and misorders words ('a now it's'). The corrected version removes redundancy and uses correct word order and collocation ('luxury item').

× But previously there was a limited options and all that.

✓ But previously there were limited options and so on.

The original mixes singular 'was' with plural 'options'. Use plural verb 'were' with 'options'. Also 'all that' is informal; 'so on' or 'etc.' is clearer.

× the PE people used to communicate OK generally with it.

✓ People generally used it to communicate in the past.

The original starts with a lowercase letter and uses unclear term 'PE people' and awkward placement of 'OK generally'. The corrected sentence clarifies meaning, fixes word order, and uses appropriate verb tense and pronoun reference.