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Part 1

Giám khảo

Did you have a bike when you were a child?

Thí sinh

Yes, I have a bike. When you were a child.

Giám khảo

Do you think bikes are popular in your country?

Thí sinh

Yes, I think bikes are quite popular in my country because nowadays people uh, are getting aware of health issues and some uh, natural. So no, some natural sources problems.

Đánh giá

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Tổng: 5.0Trôi chảy và mạch lạc: 5.0Phát âm: 5.0Ngữ pháp: 5.0Từ vựng: 5.0

Part 1

Did you have a bike when you were a child?

Điểm: 30.0

Gợi ý: Be direct, grammatically correct and provide a bit of detail. Start with a clear past-tense topic sentence, then add one or two supporting details using linking words. Avoid repeating the examiner's question. Also keep it under five sentences.

Ví dụ: Yes, I had a bike when I was a child. It was a small red bicycle with training wheels, and I used it to ride to the park every weekend. Because I practiced a lot, I learned to ride without training wheels by the age of seven.

Do you think bikes are popular in your country?

Điểm: 45.0

Gợi ý: Give a clear opinion and support it with specific reasons in coherent sentences. Use linking words (for example, because, therefore, also) and avoid filler words like "uh". Be precise about the reasons (health, environment, cost) and give a short example or result to make your answer concrete.

Ví dụ: Yes, bikes are quite popular in my country because people are more health-conscious and concerned about the environment. For example, many commuters choose cycling for short trips to reduce pollution and stay fit, so city centers now have more bike lanes and rental schemes.

Ngữ pháp

Present tense issue

× Yes, I have a bike. When you were a child.

Yes, I had a bike when I was a child.

The examiner asked about the past (when you were a child), so the student should use past tense. 'Have' is present tense; use 'had'. Also the fragment 'When you were a child.' is incorrect in reference and structure; it should be 'when I was a child' attached to the sentence. Suggestion: match the tense and referent to the question by saying 'Yes, I had a bike when I was a child.'

Present tense issue

× Yes, I think bikes are quite popular in my country because nowadays people uh, are getting aware of health issues and some uh, natural. So no, some natural sources problems.

Yes, I think bikes are quite popular in my country because nowadays people are becoming more aware of health issues and some natural resource problems.

The response mixes broken phrases and incorrect word forms. Use 'are becoming' or 'are getting' plus 'more aware' for present progressive awareness. 'Some natural' is incomplete; likely intended 'natural resource problems'. Also remove fillers and 'So no,' which contradicts the affirmation. Suggestion: streamline to 'Yes, I think bikes are quite popular in my country because nowadays people are becoming more aware of health issues and natural resource problems.'

Từ vựng trọng tâm

PopularWell-liked; Nonspecialist; Widespread; Mass
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