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Part 1

Giám khảo

Did you have a bike when you were a child?

Thí sinh

No, I didn't have a bike when I was a child because my family couldn't afford one.

Giám khảo

Do you think bikes are popular in your country?

Thí sinh

Yes, bikes are very popular in my country. I often see people riding them for commuting to work and for exercise, especially in the mornings and evenings, because cycling is cheap and environmentally friendly.

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Part 1

Did you have a bike when you were a child?

Điểm: 78.0

Gợi ý: 回答直接且清楚,但可以更自然並提供一些具体细节来丰富内容。建议:1) 用更自然的口语表达(例如用短语“I didn't have one”替代重复“a bike”);2) 提供一两句原因的补充细节(例如家庭情况、替代交通方式或童年经验);3) 控制在最多5句之内并使用连接词如“so”或“because”使逻辑更顺畅。

Ví dụ: No, I didn’t have one when I was a child because my family couldn’t afford it, so I usually walked to school or took the bus. I remember sometimes feeling a bit jealous when my friends rode around the neighborhood, but I was glad we could manage other things.

Do you think bikes are popular in your country?

Điểm: 86.0

Gợi ý: 回答明确且内容充实,但可更自然和精炼,并加入一到两个具体例子或比较以增强说服力。建议:1) 用连接词如“for example”或“in particular”引入具体情况;2) 避免重复(例如不要在同一句中多次解释“because”);3) 保持最多5句,并使用更丰富但恰当的词汇如“commute”或“eco-friendly”。

Ví dụ: Yes, bikes are very popular in my country. For example, in big cities many people commute by bike, especially during rush hour, because it’s cheap and eco-friendly. In rural areas people also use bicycles for short trips to the market.

Ngữ pháp

None

× No, I didn't have a bike when I was a child because my family couldn't afford one.

No correction needed.

该句语法正确。时态使用一致:用过去时描述童年情况(didn't have),并用过去情态动词 couldn't afford 表示当时家庭无法负担,句子结构清晰,语义准确,因此无需修改。

None

× Yes, bikes are very popular in my country. I often see people riding them for commuting to work and for exercise, especially in the mornings and evenings, because cycling is cheap and environmentally friendly.

No correction needed.

该句语法正确。主句使用一般现在时(are, often see)描述事实和习惯,动名词 riding 用法正确,短语 for commuting to work 和 for exercise 表示目的搭配恰当,because 引导的原因从句也正确,词序和时态一致,因此无需修改。

Từ vựng trọng tâm

CheapInexpensive; Poor-quality; Miserly; Despicable; Ashamed
FriendlyAffable; Amicable; Favorable; Compatible
PopularWell-liked; Nonspecialist; Widespread; Mass
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