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Part 1

Giám khảo

Did you have a bike when you were a child?

Thí sinh

Yes, I do have a bike and I usually go with my father for the bike on Sunday.

Giám khảo

Do you think bikes are popular in your country?

Thí sinh

Not actually. I lived in Taiwan. The population in Taiwan is kind of high and the density is too high for us to ride the bike that often, so we usually just use scooter or car on the road.

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Tổng: 6.0Trôi chảy và mạch lạc: 6.0Phát âm: 6.0Ngữ pháp: 5.5Từ vựng: 6.0

Part 1

Did you have a bike when you were a child?

Điểm: 58.0

Gợi ý: Use correct tense, be concise, and add a clear topic sentence plus one or two specific supporting details. Avoid grammatical errors (e.g., use past tense for childhood), reduce redundancy, and keep to under five sentences. Use linking words if giving extra details.

Ví dụ: Yes — I had a bike when I was a child. I often rode it with my father on Sundays, usually to the park near our house, which helped me learn balance and confidence. Occasionally we fixed the bike together, which was a fun way to spend time.

Do you think bikes are popular in your country?

Điểm: 64.0

Gợi ý: Answer directly with a clear topic sentence, then give specific reasons and a link phrase. Improve grammar and word choice (use present tense when describing general facts, say "Taiwan has a high population density"). Keep it within five sentences and provide concrete examples or comparisons.

Ví dụ: Not really — bicycles are less popular in Taiwan. Because Taiwan has a high population density and busy roads, many people prefer scooters or cars for convenience. For example, commuters often choose scooters to navigate traffic quickly, and bike lanes are limited in many cities.

Ngữ pháp

Present tense issue

× Yes, I do have a bike and I usually go with my father for the bike on Sunday.

Yes, I had a bike and I usually went cycling with my father on Sundays.

The question asks about the past ('when you were a child'), so verbs should be in the past tense. 'I do have' is present tense; use 'I had'. 'Go for the bike' is unnatural and ungrammatical; use 'went cycling' or 'rode a bike'. Also use the plural 'Sundays' for habitual actions in the past. Suggestion: use past simple for past habits and collocations like 'go cycling' or 'ride a bike'. Grammar_problem_type_id:6

Present tense issue

× Not actually.

Not really.

This brief reply is a word choice issue rather than tense, but in context 'Not really' is the natural response to 'Do you think bikes are popular?'. 'Not actually' is awkward. No tense change needed, but choose the idiomatic negative reply 'Not really'. Grammar_problem_type_id:6

Present tense issue

× I lived in Taiwan.

I live in Taiwan.

The examiner asks about general current situation ('Do you think bikes are popular in your country?'), so use present simple for a current fact: 'I live in Taiwan.' 'I lived' implies you no longer live there. Use present tense to state where you currently live. Grammar_problem_type_id:6

Incorrect use of adjectives or adverbs

× The population in Taiwan is kind of high and the density is too high for us to ride the bike that often, so we usually just use scooter or car on the road.

Taiwan is quite densely populated, and the population density is too high for us to ride bikes very often, so we usually use scooters or cars on the roads.

This sentence has multiple issues: awkward phrasing and word choice. Use 'Taiwan is quite densely populated' or 'the population density is high' rather than 'population...is kind of high'. 'Ride the bike' is incorrect article and singular; use 'ride bikes' or 'ride a bike' as a general activity. 'That often' is informal; use 'very often'. 'Use scooter or car' needs plural and articles: 'use scooters or cars'. 'On the road' should be plural 'on the roads'. Suggested corrections improve adjective/adverb use and pluralization. Grammar_problem_type_id:13},{

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