Part 1
Giám khảo
Did you have a bike when you were a child?
Thí sinh
Yes, when I was little I had a bike. My mom bought a small size bike bike for me when I was six years old and every weekend I would learn to.
Giám khảo
Do you think bikes are popular in your country?
Thí sinh
Not really. I think in my country people prefer to. Drive car or take subway underground or drive motorbike.
Did you have a bike when you were a child?
Điểm: 62.0Gợi ý: 回答需要更自然且完整,注意语法和句子连贯性。句子中有重复("bike bike")和不完整部分("every weekend I would learn to."),应改为完整的过去习惯表达并补充具体细节。可使用连接词把主题句与细节连接起来,比如 because/so/and,并控制在最多5句内。
Ví dụ: Yes, I had a bike when I was a child. My mother bought me a small bicycle when I was six, and I practiced riding it every weekend in the park. Because I rode so often, I became confident and could ride without help within a few months.
Do you think bikes are popular in your country?
Điểm: 58.0Gợi ý: 回答需更连贯且语法正确。避免句子断裂("prefer to. Drive car"),并给出具体理由或比较,如交通便利性、天气或安全等。使用连接词(however/although/so)让观点和原因衔接自然,控制在最多5句。
Ví dụ: Not really. In my country most people prefer driving cars or taking the subway because public transport is fast and convenient in cities. However, motorbikes are common in smaller towns where roads are narrower and parking is limited.
× My mom bought a small size bike bike for me when I was six years old and every weekend I would learn to.
✓ My mom bought a small bike for me when I was six years old, and every weekend I would learn to ride it.
句子中缺少动词的现在分词形式来完成动作表达。原句的“learn to.” 不完整,应该是“learn to ride it”(学会骑它)。另外“small size bike bike”有重复和表达冗余,应简化为“small bike”。建议:在表示“学会做某事”时,用“learn to + 动词原形”,并在句末补全被动对象或代词(如“it”)。注意避免词语重复。
× Not really. I think in my country people prefer to. Drive car or take subway underground or drive motorbike.
✓ Not really. I think in my country people prefer to drive cars, take the subway, or ride motorbikes.
原句中断句不完整且名词与冠词或复数形式使用不当。英文中用泛指时可用复数(drive cars, ride motorbikes);“subway” 前常加定冠词“the subway”;“take subway underground” 冗余且语序错误,应简化为“take the subway”。另外“drive motorbike” 更常用“ride motorbikes”。建议:使用复数表示一般习惯,用定冠词表达特指的交通工具,并用并列结构连接动词短语。