Bike— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Cevap doğrudan ve düzgün zaman kullanımıyla verilmelidir. Geçmişten bahsettiğiniz için simple past (I had) kullanılmalı; ayrıca tek cümleyle yetinmek yerine kısa destekleyici ayrıntı eklemelisiniz. Bağlaçlarla (for example, because) neden veya bir anı vererek cevabı zenginleştirin. Cümle sayısı 1-3 aralığında tutulmalı, gereksiz tekrar ve dolgu sözcüklerinden kaçının.

Ví dụ: No, I didn't have a bike when I was a child. My family couldn't afford one, so I usually walked to school. For example, I remember walking fifteen minutes each morning with my friends.

Gợi ý: Cevabınız belirsiz ifadeler ve dolgu sözcükleriyle zayıf kaldı. Görüş belirtirken kesin bir görüş cümlesiyle başlayın (I think... veya In my country...), sonra bir veya iki destekleyici neden veya örnek verin. Filmlere atıf yaparken daha net bağlam verin ve akıcı geçiş sözcükleri kullanın. Gerektiğinde 'maybe' gibi ölçülü ifadeler kullanılabilir ama belirsiz tekrarları azaltın.

Ví dụ: I think bikes are moderately popular in my country. Many people use them for short trips and exercise, especially in cities with bike lanes. For example, I often see students and delivery workers commuting by bicycle in the mornings.

× I don't have a bike.

✓ I didn't have a bike.

The examiner's question asked about the student's childhood (past), so the student should use past tense. Using present tense 'don't have' is inconsistent with the time frame. Suggestion: use past simple for states in the past: 'I didn't have a bike.'

× I don't know, but I think, umm, American, but American films watching, UH-UH, they ride the bike. So for that reason.

✓ I'm not sure, but I think Americans riding bikes in films has made them seem popular, so that might be a reason.

Multiple problems: tense and sentence structure. The response mixes present and unclear forms. The student should express uncertainty in present ('I'm not sure') and describe a general observation using present simple for habitual actions or present perfect to describe influence ('Americans riding bikes in films has made them seem popular'). Suggestion: simplify and use clear clauses: 'I'm not sure, but I think seeing Americans ride bikes in films makes bikes seem popular, so that might be a reason.'