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Part 1

Giám khảo

Did you have a bike when you were a child?

Thí sinh

Yes, I did.

Giám khảo

Do you think bikes are popular in your country?

Thí sinh

Yes, yes I do. In China, banks are the main tools that people go out.

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Part 1

Did you have a bike when you were a child?

Điểm: 65.0

Gợi ý: 回答直接但过于简短,缺乏细节和展开。建议在回答时先用一句话直接回应,然后补充1–2个支持细节(如什么时候得到的、谁送的、如何使用或对你的意义)。尽量保持总句子不超过5句,使用连接词(for example, when, because)使叙述连贯。

Ví dụ: Yes, I did. I got my first bike when I was seven as a birthday present from my parents, and I used it every day to ride to school and play with friends. For example, I remember practicing riding until I could ride without training wheels, which made me feel very independent.

Do you think bikes are popular in your country?

Điểm: 40.0

Gợi ý: 回答存在内容错误(把“bikes”误说成“banks”)且表达不清晰,缺少具体例子和原因。建议先直接回答观点,然后给出2–3个具体理由或例子(如城市通勤、共享单车普及、环保节能等),并使用连接词(because, for example, however)让论述更连贯。注意发音和词汇准确。

Ví dụ: Yes, I do. Bikes are quite popular, especially in big cities, because they are affordable and convenient for short trips. For example, shared bike services have made it easy for people to rent a bike with a phone app, and many students and workers use bikes to avoid traffic and save money.

Ngữ pháp

Incorrect use of nouns / word choice leading to wrong meaning

× Yes, yes I do. In China, banks are the main tools that people go out.

Yes, yes I do. In China, bikes are the main means of transportation that people use to go out.

句子中把“bikes”(自行车)错误写成“banks”(银行),导致句子语义完全不通。应使用“bikes”或“bicycles”,并用合适的短语表达“人们外出常用的交通工具”,如“the main means of transportation that people use to go out”。建议:写作或口语时注意单词拼写,确认名词是否合适上下文;若要表达“交通工具”,可用“means of transportation”或直接用“transport”或“vehicles”。

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