Part 1
Giám khảo
Did you have a bike when you were a child?
Thí sinh
Yes I do, when I was about 6 years old, uh, I shared my bike with my sisters.
Giám khảo
Do you think bikes are popular in your country?
Thí sinh
Yes, I do umm, although motorcycle here uh may be more popular, but uh bike is getting more and more popular because uh the government is promoting uh the bike like you bike in every city. Help us to of.
Did you have a bike when you were a child?
Điểm: 72.0Gợi ý: 回答要注意時態正確、語句完整並避免過多語塞詞。可以用一到兩句總結,再用一到兩句補充具體細節(如對騎車的回憶或與姊妹分享的經驗),並使用連接詞使敘述更流暢。建議練習將“uh/umm”減少,改用短暫停頓。
Ví dụ: Yes, I did. When I was about six years old, I had a small bicycle that I often shared with my sisters. We used to take turns riding it around the neighborhood and helped each other learn to balance.
Do you think bikes are popular in your country?
Điểm: 60.0Gợi ý: 回答應更有條理、語言更精確並避免冗長與語塞。先直接給出觀點,再用一到兩句具體原因支持(例如政府政策、健康或環保原因),使用連接詞如“however”或“because”來連接句子。注意語法和詞彙準確性,避免不完整片語。
Ví dụ: Yes, I think bicycles are becoming more popular. Although motorcycles are still common, the government has been promoting cycling by improving bike lanes and providing public bike-sharing systems, so more people choose bikes for short trips.
× Yes I do, when I was about 6 years old, uh, I shared my bike with my sisters.
✓ Yes, I did. When I was about six years old, I shared my bike with my sisters.
问题类型:现在时/过去时错误。原句开头用“Yes I do”是现在时,但随后句子谈论过去(“when I was about 6 years old”),时态不一致。应把回答改为过去时“Yes, I did”以与后半句一致;另外在书写上加逗号和首字母大写更规范。建议:回答过去发生的事情时使用过去时(did, shared等)。
× Yes, I do umm, although motorcycle here uh may be more popular, but uh bike is getting more and more popular because uh the government is promoting uh the bike like you bike in every city. Help us to of.
✓ Yes, I do. Although motorcycles here may be more popular, bicycles are becoming more and more popular because the government is promoting bikes in every city to help us.
问题类型:代词和名词使用不当及句子结构混乱。原句存在单复数错误(motorcycle应为motorcycles)、代词/名词选择不当(bike可换为bicycle或 bikes),以及冗余或错误短语(“like you bike” 和“Help us to of” 无意义)。改正要点:1) 将单数改为复数以表示一般情况;2) 用更正式的词(bicycles/bikes);3) 简化句子并修正不完整的目的结构(to help us)。建议:说一般事实时用复数名词;避免口语填充词影响句子完整性;表达目的用“to + 动词原形”。