Part 1
Giám khảo
Did you have a bike when you were a child?
Thí sinh
Yes, I like riding bikes in my childhood and it improves my ability to learning new things in a short period.
Giám khảo
Do you think bikes are popular in your country?
Thí sinh
Yes, because I think it's a way to live in a environmental friendly life and it is convenient for me to go to the company.
Did you have a bike when you were a child?
Điểm: 64.0Gợi ý: 回答要更直接并按照基本结构展开。先给出简洁的主题句,然后用一到两句具体支持细节(例如什么时候有、谁送的、常去哪里骑、学到了哪些技能)。注意语法(如过去时、动名词用法)和连贯衔接词的使用。不要超过五句。
Ví dụ: Yes, I did. I had a simple red bicycle from when I was about seven, which my parents bought for me. I rode it almost every day to visit friends and explore my neighborhood, and that helped me become more confident and learn new skills, like balancing and fixing minor problems on the bike.
Do you think bikes are popular in your country?
Điểm: 68.0Gợi ý: 回答要更具体并使用连词使逻辑清晰。先给出明确立场,然后用具体原因和例子支持(如城市中使用比例、交通、环保或成本方面的优势)。注意语法(a environmental → an environmentally)。限定句子数在五句内。
Ví dụ: Yes, I think bikes are quite popular in my country. Many people choose cycling for short trips because it is inexpensive and helps avoid traffic. In big cities, bike lanes and shared bike programs have made cycling more convenient and environmentally friendly.
× Yes, I like riding bikes in my childhood and it improves my ability to learning new things in a short period.
✓ Yes, I liked riding bikes in my childhood and it improved my ability to learn new things in a short period.
问题类型:现在时/过去时使用错误(时态不一致)。说明:句子描述的是过去的情况(childhood),应使用过去时态。将 like 改为 liked,improves 改为 improved。另:动词短语“ability to learning”结构错误,应该用不定式“ability to learn”。建议:把描述过去经历的动词都改为过去式,并把“ability to learning”改为“ability to learn”。
× Yes, because I think it's a way to live in a environmental friendly life and it is convenient for me to go to the company.
✓ Yes, because I think it's a way to live an environmentally friendly life and it is convenient for me to go to the company.
问题类型:冠词使用错误及形容词/副词使用错误。说明:在“a environmental friendly life”中,a 后面应接以辅音音素开头的单词,但“environmental”以元音音素开头,正确冠词为“an”。另外“environmental friendly”应为复合形容词“environmentally friendly”或“environmentally-friendly”,这里需使用副词形式“environmentally”修饰“friendly”。建议:将“a environmental friendly life”改为“an environmentally friendly life”。