Part 1
Giám khảo
Did you have a bike when you were a child?
Thí sinh
Yes, when I was a child I usually rode the bike when my family is and spend time together at the evening after I went to school.
Giám khảo
Do you think bikes are popular in your country?
Thí sinh
Yes, I think that that nowadays it the bicycle is still popular in my country because I have seen many many like how like we can rent a bike near near the park.
Did you have a bike when you were a child?
Điểm: 55.0Gợi ý: Make your answer direct, grammatical and concise. Start with a clear topic sentence, then add one or two specific supporting details using correct tense and linking words. Correct common grammar errors (use past tense consistently, possessive forms, and articles) and avoid repetition.
Ví dụ: Yes. I had a bicycle when I was a child. I often rode it in the evenings after school with my family, and we would cycle to the nearby park to spend time together.
Do you think bikes are popular in your country?
Điểm: 50.0Gợi ý: Give a clear opinion and support it with one or two specific reasons or examples. Use linking words (because, for example, one reason is) and avoid repetitions and filler words. Keep sentences grammatically correct and concise.
Ví dụ: Yes, bicycles are still popular in my country. For example, many cities now have public bike‑sharing stations near parks and transit stops, so people often rent bikes for short trips and leisure rides.
× Yes, when I was a child I usually rode the bike when my family is and spend time together at the evening after I went to school.
✓ Yes, when I was a child I usually rode the bike when my family was spending time together in the evening after I went to school.
Errors: 'is and spend' is wrong tense/agreement and 'at the evening' uses wrong preposition. The clause describes past habitual actions, so use past continuous 'was spending' for an ongoing family activity and past simple 'rode' for the habitual action (already used). Change 'at the evening' to 'in the evening'. Suggestion: keep consistent past tense for events in the past and use 'in the evening' for that time expression. Grammar problem type ID:6
× Yes, I think that that nowadays it the bicycle is still popular in my country because I have seen many many like how like we can rent a bike near near the park.
✓ Yes, I think that nowadays bicycles are still popular in my country because I have seen many places where we can rent a bike near the park.
Errors: unnecessary repetition 'that that' and 'near near', incorrect word order 'it the bicycle is', and tense/number issues. 'Nowadays' refers to present, so use present simple 'bicycles are' (plural) rather than 'the bicycle is'. Replace vague 'many many like how like' with 'many places where'. Remove duplicate words. Suggestion: avoid filler words, ensure subject-verb agreement (plural noun with 'are'), and use clearer nouns/clauses such as 'places where we can rent a bike'. Grammar problem type ID:6