Bike— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Be direct and use correct tense and simple, natural sentences. Start with a clear topic sentence (e.g., “Yes, I had a bike when I was a child.”), then add 1–2 specific supporting details using linking words. Correct grammar: use past tense (‘I had’), fix subject-verb agreement, and avoid repetitions. Keep it within 2–4 sentences.

Ví dụ: Yes, I had a bike when I was a child. It was a small red bicycle with training wheels, and I learned to ride it in my neighborhood park. I remember feeling very proud the day I rode it without help, which was one of my happiest childhood memories.

Gợi ý: Give a clear direct answer, use simple cohesive linking words, and correct grammar (subject-verb agreement, articles). Provide specific reasons or examples. Structure: topic sentence + 2 specific supporting points (e.g., reasons and an example). Avoid vague phrases like ‘as much as I know’ and repeated words.

Ví dụ: Yes, bikes are very popular in my country. One reason is that cities are crowded and public transport can be unreliable, so many people choose bicycles for short trips. In addition, cycling is affordable and healthy, and I often see office workers and students commuting by bike during weekdays.

× Absolutely yes. I have a bike when I raise a kid.

✓ Absolutely yes. I had a bike when I was a child.

The question asks about the past (when you were a child), so the student must use past tense. 'Have' is present tense and 'when I raise a kid' is incorrect timeframe and verb form. Use past simple 'had' and the time expression 'when I was a child' to match the past context. Suggestion: use past simple for events completed in the past and match the correct time phrase.

× There were so much fun in and and really memorable.

✓ It was so much fun and really memorable.

'There were' is plural and inappropriate for the uncountable noun 'fun'. Use 'It was' to refer to the experience. Also 'so much fun' is correct for uncountable 'fun'. Remove the duplicated 'and' and place adjective 'memorable' after the linking verb. Suggestion: use 'It was' + adjective for single experiences and avoid duplicating words.

× As much as I know a having a bike is really popular at that right now because it have a lot of population right now and the transportation really strict.

✓ As far as I know, having a bike is really popular right now because there is a large population and transportation is very strict.

Multiple issues: 'As much as I know' is nonstandard; use 'As far as I know'. 'A having a bike' is incorrect article and gerund usage; use 'having a bike'. 'It have a lot of population' has subject-verb and noun choice errors: use 'there is a large population' (or 'a large population') and singular 'is'. 'The transportation really strict' lacks verb and adverb: use 'transportation is very strict'. Maintain present simple for current facts. Suggestion: use correct idiom, gerund without an article, 'there is' for existence, and include the verb 'is'.

× So people are using bike and I think they prefer using bike because riding your bike is really healthy for everyone.

✓ So people are using bikes and I think they prefer using bikes because riding your bike is really healthy for everyone.

'Bike' should be plural after 'people are using' and 'prefer using' because it refers to bikes in general. Use 'bikes' to match the plural subject. The last clause 'riding your bike is really healthy' is acceptable but keep consistent plural when speaking generally: 'using bikes' and 'prefer bikes'. Suggestion: ensure noun number matches the subject when making general statements.