Part 1
Giám khảo
Did you have a bike when you were a child?
Thí sinh
Yes, I have a yellow one. I always ride a bike with my friend.
Giám khảo
Do you think bikes are popular in your country?
Thí sinh
Yes, I think so. More people always ride bike to go to work.
Did you have a bike when you were a child?
Điểm: 68.0Gợi ý: 1) 动词时态和形式需要与过去时间点一致;2) 回答应直接且稍作扩展,包含具体细节并使用连接词使句子连贯;3) 控制在最多5句内并避免重复。改进细节:将现在时改为过去时(have → had, ride → rode);加一到两句具体描述(例如骑车的频率、去的地方、与朋友的活动),并使用连接词如“because”或“so”来衔接句子。
Ví dụ: Yes, I had a yellow bike when I was a child. I often rode it with my friend to the park, so we would spend hours playing and racing. It was small but sturdy, and I remember feeling very proud of it.
Do you think bikes are popular in your country?
Điểm: 72.0Gợi ý: 1) 用更自然的表达和更准确的词汇(例如 'many people' 或 'a lot of people' 而非 'more people',并用现在时的一般现在时表达习惯性动作);2) 提供具体原因或例子以支持观点,并使用连接词使回答连贯;3) 避免绝对化副词如 'always',改为 'often' 或 'frequently'。
Ví dụ: Yes, I think bicycles are quite popular in my country. Many people often ride bikes to work because it is cheaper and helps them avoid traffic, especially in big cities.
× Yes, I have a yellow one.
✓ Yes, I had a yellow one.
原句用現在時態(have),但考官問的是過去(when you were a child),應使用過去式 had。建議:根據時間狀語(when you were a child)把動詞改為過去式。
× I always ride a bike with my friend.
✓ I used to ride a bike with my friend.
原句使用現在時(always ride),但描述兒時習慣應使用過去(used to)或過去習慣式。若保留現在完成式或一般過去時則更符合語境。建議:描述過去的習慣時用 'used to' 或用一般過去時加頻率詞,例如 'I rode a bike with my friend.'。
× Yes, I think so.
✓ Yes, I think so.
此句無需改動,時態與提問相符,保留現在時表示一般看法。
× More people always ride bike to go to work.
✓ More people always ride bikes to go to work.
原句中 'bike' 應為可數名詞,與 'more people' 一起使用時需用複數形式 'bikes'。建議:可將名詞變為複數 'bikes';另外語序上可將 'always' 放在 'always ride'(原句已放置,亦可改為 'ride bikes to work')。