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Part 1

Giám khảo

Did you have a bike when you were a child?

Thí sinh

Yes, I have a bag. I always take a bike with my best friend. So my best friend name is Fatina and she is a university student now.

Giám khảo

Do you think bikes are popular in your country?

Thí sinh

I think it's yes because in my country take a bag is a common thing. For example people always take a bite in weekend because it's very relaxed and enjoyable.

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Part 1

Did you have a bike when you were a child?

Điểm: 45.0

Gợi ý: 回答不直接、语法和词汇使用不准确,且信息与问题不完全相关。建议: 1) 直接用一到两句说明是否有自行车(主题句),注意时态(过去时)。 2) 用一到两句补充具体细节,例如你什么时候得到的自行车、和谁一起骑、骑车的频率或记忆,使用连接词如“and”、“because”或“when”使句子连贯。 3) 注意常用词语的正确拼写和搭配,例如“bike”而不是“bag”,“have”要改为过去式“had”。 4) 保持答案自然简洁,不超过五句。 示例练习步骤:先构思1句主题句,然后补充1–2个具体细节并用连接词衔接。

Ví dụ: Yes, I had a bike when I was a child. I got it as a birthday present when I was eight, and I often rode it with my best friend Fatina after school. We usually cycled around the neighborhood every weekend because it was fun and relaxing.

Do you think bikes are popular in your country?

Điểm: 35.0

Gợi ý: 回答含糊、不自然并有多处词汇和表达错误,且缺乏具体细节。建议: 1) 直接回答问题(Yes/No)并给出原因(主题句+原因)。 2) 使用准确词汇(例如“bike”而不是“bag/bite”),并给出具体例子或证据(如骑行人数、场合、骑行文化或自行车道等)。 3) 使用连接词(because, for example, therefore)使逻辑清晰。 4) 控制长度,最多五句且信息集中。 练习时先列出两三个支持点,再用一两句组织成答案。

Ví dụ: Yes, I think bikes are quite popular in my country because many people use them for short trips and exercise. For example, families often ride bikes in parks or on weekends, and many cities have bike lanes that make cycling convenient and safe.

Ngữ pháp

12: Incorrect use of pronouns

× Yes, I have a bag.

Yes, I had a bike.

原句用詞不當。考官問的是“Did you have a bike when you were a child?”(過去是否有自行車),學生回答應以過去式並直接回應“bike”。原句用“have”表示現在,且提到“bag”與問題不符。建議用過去式回答並回應同一事物,例如“I had a bike.”(我小時候有一輛自行車)。

27: Subject-verb agreement errors

× I always take a bike with my best friend.

I always rode a bike with my best friend.

原句主動詞時態與詢問的過去時間不一致。問題問的是童年(過去),因此動詞應使用過去式“rode”。此外,短語“take a bike with”不自然,表示一起騎車應使用“ride a bike with”。建議將動詞換為過去式並用正確搭配:"I always rode a bike with my best friend."。

12: Incorrect use of pronouns

× So my best friend name is Fatina and she is a university student now.

My best friend's name was Fatina, and she is a university student now.

原句缺少所有格“'s”來表達“朋友的名字”,且句子中時間參照混合:前半句談過去的朋友(與前文一致應為過去式或明確說明),後半句說她現在是大學生。將“my best friend name”改為“My best friend's name”是所有格用法,同時如果要強調過去關係可用過去式“was”。建議:"My best friend's name was Fatina, and she is a university student now."(若朋友仍是同一人則可保留現在式's name is')。

6: Present tense issue

× I think it's yes because in my country take a bag is a common thing.

I think so, because in my country riding a bike is a common thing.

原句語法與詞語使用不正確。"I think it's yes" 不自然,應說"I think so"。短語"take a bag" 與原意不符(應為騎自行車或帶著包),根據上下文應為"ride a bike"。此外,整句描述一般事實可用現在式"is"。建議改為:"I think so, because in my country riding a bike is common."。

11: Incorrect use of prepositions

× For example people always take a bite in weekend because it's very relaxed and enjoyable.

For example, people always ride a bike on weekends because it's very relaxing and enjoyable.

原句有多處錯誤:"take a bite" 是拼寫或用詞錯誤(bite 意為咬),應為"ride a bike"。時間短語應為"on weekends"(表示在周末),而非"in weekend"。此外,形容詞"relaxed"描述人的狀態,用來修飾活動應用現在分詞/形容詞"relaxing"。建議改為:"For example, people always ride a bike on weekends because it's very relaxing and enjoyable."。

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