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Part 1

Giám khảo

Did you have a bike when you were a child?

Thí sinh

Hi.

Giám khảo

Do you think bikes are popular in your country?

Thí sinh

I had Surah.

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Tổng: 5.0Trôi chảy và mạch lạc: 5.0Phát âm: 5.0Ngữ pháp: 5.0Từ vựng: 5.0

Part 1

Did you have a bike when you were a child?

Điểm: 10.0

Gợi ý: Your reply does not answer the question and is unrelated. To improve, give a direct topic sentence stating whether you had a bike, then add one or two specific supporting details (e.g., who you rode with, how often, a memorable moment). Keep it natural, concise (max 5 sentences), and use linking words like “and” or “because” to connect ideas.

Ví dụ: Yes, I did have a bike when I was a child. It was a small red bicycle that my parents bought for me when I was six, and I rode it every day after school. I often went to the park with my older brother, which helped me become more confident riding on busy paths.

Do you think bikes are popular in your country?

Điểm: 8.0

Gợi ý: The answer provided is unrelated. To improve, start with a clear opinion about bike popularity, then support it with specific reasons or examples (for instance, mention bike lanes, weather, cultural habits, or statistics). Use linking words such as “because,” “for example,” or “however” to make your response coherent and natural.

Ví dụ: Yes, I think bikes are quite popular in my country because many cities have dedicated bike lanes and people use bikes for short commutes. For example, students and office workers often cycle to avoid traffic, and there are shared-bike programs in several urban areas.

Ngữ pháp

Incorrect use of pronouns

× Hi.

Hello.

The response 'Hi.' is not a grammatical error but is inappropriate for answering the examiner's question; it uses an interjection instead of addressing the question. Replace with 'Hello.' or better, directly answer the question to be relevant. Suggestion: respond to the question about having a bike in childhood rather than giving a greeting. Example appropriate answer: 'Yes, I had a bike when I was a child.'

Sentence structure errors

× I had Surah.

Yes, I had a bicycle named Surah.

The original sentence 'I had Surah.' lacks clarity and proper noun usage. It may be intended to say the student had a bike called 'Surah.' To be grammatically correct and clear, include an article and a noun: 'a bicycle' and indicate naming with 'named Surah.' Also ensure the tense matches the past-time question ('Did you have... when you were a child?') which requires past simple 'had.' Suggestion: Always include the object (bicycle) and use 'named' or 'called' when giving a name: 'Yes, I had a bicycle named Surah.'

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