Bike— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Clarify meaning, correct vocabulary, shorten and organize into a clear topic sentence plus 1–2 supporting details. Use correct word (bike), fix grammar, and add linking words for coherence. Aim for 2–3 sentences, e.g.: state you had a bike, say who taught you and mention a specific difficulty and how you improved.

Ví dụ: Yes, I had a bike when I was a child. My family taught me to ride and at first I kept falling, but after practising I learned to ride steadily in a straight line and to control turns safely.

Gợi ý: Make a clear direct answer, then give two specific supporting points linked logically. Correct grammar and awkward phrases, use precise vocabulary (e.g., ‘motorbikes’ or ‘bicycles’), and avoid incomplete fragments. Keep to 2–3 sentences and use linking words like 'also' or 'for example'.

Ví dụ: Yes, bikes are very popular in my country. For example, many people use motorbikes for daily travel in cities, and others post photos of riding in the mountains or countryside on social media.

× Yes I did have a bag when I was a child I was even taught by my family and at first I kept on falling but I learned what only for riding straight ahead and no curving or U-turn.

✓ Yes, I did have a bike when I was a child. I was taught by my family, and at first I kept falling, but I learned to ride straight ahead without turning or making U-turns.

Multiple past tense and word-choice problems: 'did have a bag' should be 'did have a bike' to match context (word choice). Run-on sentence needed splitting into two sentences. 'kept on falling' is acceptable but 'kept falling' is more natural. 'learned what only for riding' is ungrammatical; correct form is 'learned to ride' (infinitive after 'learned'). Use 'without turning or making U-turns' to convey restriction. Also add commas and periods to separate clauses for clarity.

× Yes, I keep seeing bikers in the road or even my friends stories and social media where they ride off to four places like in the mountains or in the province and even in subdivisions we can see the bikes and with the increased.

✓ Yes, I often see bikers on the road, in my friends' stories, and on social media where they ride to places like the mountains, the provinces, or subdivisions. Bikes have also become more common recently.

Present tense and preposition errors: 'keep seeing' is grammatical but 'often see' is more natural. Use 'on the road' not 'in the road'. Possessive needed: 'friends' stories' requires an apostrophe. 'ride off to four places' is unclear; use 'ride to places like'. 'the province' should be plural or specified; 'the provinces' or 'the province' depending on meaning—'the provinces' fits better. Sentence was a run-on and unfinished ('and with the increased'); split into two sentences and finish idea: 'Bikes have also become more common recently.' This corrects tense consistency and clarifies meaning.