Part 1
Giám khảo
Did you have a bike when you were a child?
Thí sinh
Yes I have when I were a child. I always have fun with my friends by bike.
Giám khảo
Do you think bikes are popular in your country?
Thí sinh
Yes, it's very popular and I think it is also a very friendly or green way to traffic.
Did you have a bike when you were a child?
Điểm: 52.0Gợi ý: 语法与时态错误较多,句子结构不够清晰。建议: 1) 使用正确的过去时态(例如:had, was)。 2) 开头先给出直接回答的主题句,然后用1–2句具体细节支持,避免冗长或重复。 3) 使用连接词(e.g. and, so, with)使句子更连贯。 练习方法:把回答分成两部分——主题句(Did you have a bike? → Yes, I did.)和支持句(描述频率、和谁、做了什么等),并注意时态一致。
Ví dụ: Yes, I did. I had a small red bike when I was a child, and I often rode it with my friends after school. We used to cycle to the park every weekend, which was great fun and helped me learn to be more independent.
Do you think bikes are popular in your country?
Điểm: 66.0Gợi ý: 用词与表达需要更地道与具体。建议: 1) 主句与说明句分明,使用更自然的词汇(e.g. popular, common, environmentally friendly)。 2) 用连接词(for example, because, so)展开具体原因或例子,提供更有说服力的细节。 3) 注意单复数和搭配(e.g. bikes are popular; a green mode of transport)。
Ví dụ: Yes, bikes are quite popular in my country because many people use them for short trips. For example, in cities you can see people commuting to work by bike, and there are many bike lanes which makes cycling safer and more environmentally friendly.
× Yes I have when I were a child.
✓ Yes, I had one when I was a child.
问题类型:现在时使用不当(应使用过去时)。句子描述过去的情况,应使用过去时态。原句中使用了现在时动词 "have" 和错误的主谓形 "were"。建议:把动词改为过去式,主语为单数第一/第三人称时用 "was",因此应改为 "I had one when I was a child."(注意在“had”后可以加“one”或具体名词如“a bike”)。
× I always have fun with my friends by bike.
✓ I always had fun with my friends riding a bike.
问题类型:现在时使用不当(应使用过去时)和动词形式问题。因为前一句为过去时态,描述童年习惯应使用过去时,所以“have”应改为过去式“had”。另外,短语“by bike”在英语中更自然的表达是“riding a bike”或“on my bike”。建议将句子改为“ I always had fun with my friends riding a bike.” 或 “I always had fun with my friends on my bike.”
× Yes, it's very popular and I think it is also a very friendly or green way to traffic.
✓ Yes, they're very popular, and I think they are also a very friendly, green way to travel.
问题类型:第三人称单数/复数问题与词汇搭配错误。句子中谈论“bikes”(复数),但用“it's”指代单数,且“way to traffic”是不正确的搭配,正确应为“way to travel”或“mode of transport”。建议:用复数代词“they're/they are”指代“bikes”,并把“traffic”改为“travel”或“get around”。另外用逗号分隔形容词“friendly, green”。