Part 1
Giám khảo
Did you have a bike when you were a child?
Thí sinh
Of course my parents, they are all like sport and they want me to study some sports like bike, so I have a bike when I was.
Giám khảo
Do you think bikes are popular in your country?
Thí sinh
Yes, I think it's popular because many people like my friend, they are all S studied when there were child.
Did you have a bike when you were a child?
Điểm: 52.0Gợi ý: 句子结构混乱且有语法错误,信息表达不够明确。回答应直接回应问题并用一到两句话补充具体细节,如什么时候开始、谁买的或常去哪里骑。注意时态一致,避免多余词汇,并使用连接词保持连贯性。示例要言简意赅,句子不超过五句。
Ví dụ: Yes, I had a bike when I was a child. My parents bought it for me when I was seven because they wanted me to do more exercise, and I often rode it around the neighborhood with my friends.
Do you think bikes are popular in your country?
Điểm: 40.0Gợi ý: 表达含糊且语法错误严重,支持细节不具体。回答应先给出明确观点,然后用具体原因或例子支持,例如城市通勤、环保或锻炼习惯。使用连接词(because, for example, such as)来组织信息,注意单复数和时态。保持回答自然、简短且相关。
Ví dụ: Yes, bikes are quite popular in my country because many people use them for short commutes and exercise. For example, in my city you can see commuters riding bicycles to work and students cycling to school.
× Of course my parents, they are all like sport and they want me to study some sports like bike, so I have a bike when I was.
✓ Of course. My parents all liked sports and they wanted me to practice sports like cycling, so I had a bike when I was a child.
问题类型:句子结构错误(ID 26)以及时态和用词错误(ID 5、6,参见下文)。原句中有多处结构和时态混乱:1) “my parents, they are all like sport” 中逗号拼接两个主语导致重复,用法不当;“are all like sport” 用词不合适,表达应为“liked sports”或“like sports”(因为叙述过去情况用过去时)。2) “they want me to study some sports like bike” 中 want 与不定式搭配可以,但“study sports”不自然,应使用“practice”或“do”,且“bike”应为“cycling”或“riding a bike”。3) “so I have a bike when I was” 时态和句尾不完整,应为过去时“had a bike when I was a child”。改正建议:把句子分成清晰的短句,使用一致的过去时态,替换不自然的词汇,补全缺失信息。具体建议:将“are all like sport”改为“all liked sports/like sports”(根据语境选择过去或现在时),用“practice”或“ride a bike/cycle”代替“study some sports like bike”,并把最后部分改为完整的过去时间状语“when I was a child”。
× Yes, I think it's popular because many people like my friend, they are all S studied when there were child.
✓ Yes, I think they're popular because many people, like my friends, all learned to ride when they were children.
问题类型:过去时问题(ID 5)和代词/句子结构错误(ID 12、26)。原句错误包括:1) “like my friend” 需要复数“friends”以匹配“many people”;2) “they are all S studied” 语法混乱,动词形式错误,应该用过去时“learned to ride”或“learned riding”;3) “when there were child” 中“there”用错,应为“they”且“child”应为复数“children”或用“children/when they were children”。改正建议:将句子整理为“many people, like my friends, all learned to ride when they were children”,使用一致的过去时态并修正代词和复数形式。