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Part 1

Giám khảo

Did you have a bike when you were a child?

Thí sinh

Actually, yes, I have a bike when I was in a primary school and my mother teach me that and I often write it after school and with my friends.

Giám khảo

Do you think bikes are popular in your country?

Thí sinh

Yes, I think that is because riding bike is a green vehicle and I think it's good to environment and it's reduce the carbon and also reduce the global warming.

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Part 1

Did you have a bike when you were a child?

Điểm: 48.0

Gợi ý: 你需要改进时态与语法,句子要更自然并且简洁。先直接回答问题,然后用一两句具体细节扩展。注意动词时态(过去时),把拼写和词形改正(例如 have→had,teach→taught,write→ride)。可以加入地点、频率或与谁一起的具体信息来丰富内容。

Ví dụ: Yes, I did. I had a small red bike when I was in primary school. My mother taught me to ride it in the park, and I used to ride home from school with my friends almost every day.

Do you think bikes are popular in your country?

Điểm: 52.0

Gợi ý: 要表达更有条理,避免重复短语并使用更准确的词汇。先给出简短观点,然后用一两句具体原因或例子支持。注意名词搭配(good for the environment),以及使用单数/复数和动词形式(reduce carbon emissions)。可以提到城市通勤、政府政策或健康因素作为具体支持。

Ví dụ: Yes, I think bicycles are quite popular. They are an affordable and eco-friendly way to travel, especially for short trips in cities. For example, many people cycle to work or school to save money and reduce carbon emissions.

Ngữ pháp

Present tense issue

× Actually, yes, I have a bike when I was in a primary school and my mother teach me that and I often write it after school and with my friends.

Actually, yes, I had a bike when I was in primary school. My mother taught me to ride it, and I often rode it after school with my friends.

问题类型:现在时/过去时混用与动词形式错误。原句中“have a bike when I was”时态不一致,描述过去的情况应使用过去时“had”。“my mother teach me”应为过去式“taught”;“teach me that”措辞错误,应该是“taught me to ride it”;“I often write it”拼写/用词错误,应为过去式动词“rode”。建议:描述过去经历时,全句使用过去时;注意动词过去式变化并用正确短语(teach someone to do sth)。

Present tense issue

× Yes, I think that is because riding bike is a green vehicle and I think it's good to environment and it's reduce the carbon and also reduce the global warming.

Yes, I think that is because bicycles are an environmentally friendly form of transport. I think they're good for the environment because they reduce carbon emissions and help slow global warming.

问题类型:现在时表达与词汇搭配问题。原句中时态和主谓一致、名词搭配不当:应使用复数或可数名词复数形式“bicycles are”或“a bicycle is”;“riding bike is a green vehicle”结构混乱,应说“bicycles are an environmentally friendly form of transport”;“good to environment”应为“good for the environment”;“it's reduce the carbon”动词形式错误,应为“they reduce carbon emissions”。建议:使用正确的可数/不可数名词形式与固定搭配(good for the environment, carbon emissions),主谓一致并保持现在时描述普遍事实。

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